Just Like the Leaves Change in Colors - Comments

  • Living Lies.

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    I don't like you.... you make me sad..... but I love you and this story... I'm so confused... must go cry in a corner now :'(

    Please update immediately, or you shall receive a long, tearful message delivered by a leprechaun riding a unicorn...
    September 2nd, 2012 at 12:32am
  • hausofwolves

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    MY HEART IS BREAKING.
    UGH, BUT IT'S SO DEVASTATINGLY BEAUTIFUL.
    September 1st, 2012 at 11:57pm
  • sins-97

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    Jesus-Fuck.
    I AM BAWLING MY EYES OUT.
    I am crying SOOO much.
    That last line just killed me. I was gone.
    It's been 10 minutes since I read it and I am still crying. That's how beautifully tragic it was.
    September 1st, 2012 at 08:11pm
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    I'm not crying...
    No...
    :,(
    I lied, I am.
    September 1st, 2012 at 06:25pm
  • RayTorosArmy

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    Oh my god. My heart hurts. This is so good though!xo
    September 1st, 2012 at 03:46pm
  • Heart-Of-Onyx-

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    I'm in love with this story <3 please you must update!! :D
    August 31st, 2012 at 03:06am
  • Living Lies.

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    This has to be updated immediately :) much love to you for this story. You're an amazing writer and I can't wait to read more.
    -Katie
    August 30th, 2012 at 08:47pm
  • YoungandLoadedKid

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    I held my breath throughout the whole chapter. It was so intense and I just clearly don't know how to explain it but it was wonderful. Not many writers can write chapters like these. Hell stories like this one, so awesome job.
    Can't wait til' the next chapter. :)
    -Jenn.
    August 30th, 2012 at 06:02pm
  • sins-97

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    I really adored the part about the sun rising and the film at the start.
    I gave a depth to the chapter that a lot of authors are not able to reach. Loved the way the last paragraph kind of interconnected with the titanic and the way at first they were just too quite but in the end they did get saved.
    Cannot wait for the next bit and to see if Gee is okay.
    August 30th, 2012 at 10:24am
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    ;(
    August 30th, 2012 at 03:18am
  • CyanideSweetheart

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    YOU MUST UPDATE EASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEASSEEEE AKZHDKWJDBEK!!!!

    But Anywhore... I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH
    August 30th, 2012 at 03:06am
  • Andlat

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    You MUST update again soon!!!!! I've been on the edge of my seat for DAYS!!!!
    But anyways, like most commenters/readers on this story, I don't really think it'll be Gerard, like maybe Bob or Ray,or even Frank's dad. BUT PLEASE DON'T LET GERARD BE HURT!!!!!! Okay. That is all. :D
    August 30th, 2012 at 02:56am
  • hausofwolves

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    i am so hung on anxiety for this story, you are one fabulous writer i am so excited for this.
    August 30th, 2012 at 01:06am
  • Unexpected.

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    It was Bob wasn't it?
    If Gerarld is dead... I don't know what I'll do...
    August 30th, 2012 at 12:41am
  • Dumb_dumb

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    I feel like it's going to be Bob and not Gerard. I'm pretty sure Donald is dead. I just..I really hope that Gerard is not dead. I love your writing, but I think that would kill any story for me. If he's hurt that's something to be able to cope with, but dead? Nope. That's when I put my hands over my eyes and act like a five year old with the whole "lalalala! I didn't see that! I'm not listening!" This chapter sent chills of suspicion and suspense up and down my spine. The whole chapter is vague yet it holds a tremendous amount osuspense, foreshadow, emotions and thoughts.
    August 30th, 2012 at 12:40am
  • DigitalDangerKilljoy

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    Oh my god...update SOON! Please i loved that chapter!
    August 30th, 2012 at 12:11am
  • Battery_Star

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    Ohmygod! I was like, on the edge of my seat the whole chapter! Please update real fast:D
    August 29th, 2012 at 11:49pm
  • Heart-Of-Onyx-

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    D: update soon! please!!
    August 25th, 2012 at 06:16am
  • CyanideSweetheart

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    NNNNNNOOOOOOOO DX
    August 24th, 2012 at 05:07am
  • killerlithium

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    nnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! you can't end the chapter llike that! that's just too cruel update soon as in soon soon please please please
    August 23rd, 2012 at 04:15pm