Jesus-Fuck. I AM BAWLING MY EYES OUT. I am crying SOOO much. That last line just killed me. I was gone. It's been 10 minutes since I read it and I am still crying. That's how beautifully tragic it was.
I held my breath throughout the whole chapter. It was so intense and I just clearly don't know how to explain it but it was wonderful. Not many writers can write chapters like these. Hell stories like this one, so awesome job. Can't wait til' the next chapter. :) -Jenn.
I really adored the part about the sun rising and the film at the start. I gave a depth to the chapter that a lot of authors are not able to reach. Loved the way the last paragraph kind of interconnected with the titanic and the way at first they were just too quite but in the end they did get saved. Cannot wait for the next bit and to see if Gee is okay.
You MUST update again soon!!!!! I've been on the edge of my seat for DAYS!!!! But anyways, like most commenters/readers on this story, I don't really think it'll be Gerard, like maybe Bob or Ray,or even Frank's dad. BUT PLEASE DON'T LET GERARD BE HURT!!!!!! Okay. That is all. :D
I feel like it's going to be Bob and not Gerard. I'm pretty sure Donald is dead. I just..I really hope that Gerard is not dead. I love your writing, but I think that would kill any story for me. If he's hurt that's something to be able to cope with, but dead? Nope. That's when I put my hands over my eyes and act like a five year old with the whole "lalalala! I didn't see that! I'm not listening!" This chapter sent chills of suspicion and suspense up and down my spine. The whole chapter is vague yet it holds a tremendous amount osuspense, foreshadow, emotions and thoughts.
Please update immediately, or you shall receive a long, tearful message delivered by a leprechaun riding a unicorn...