I'm kind of hoping that Frank doesn't become pregnant (right away, anyways.); that'd be too easy. A lot of people give their characters exactly what they want right after they want it, and, trying my hardest not to sound like a bitch, I want Gerard and Frank to struggle a little with this. But, being a parent in general is a struggle, so I guess I could see Frank and Gerard having problems during the pregnancy... Hmm... Anyways, love the story. I haven't read any werewolf stories on here, but it's a nice change from the usual normal fan fiction or vampire fan fiction. Update soon. s'il vous plait.
:0 Holy mother of fuck. This story is fuking amazing. Rofl super fertilization hits frank, frank becomes horny. They fucked. So what comes next, Frankie with a baby carriage.
IM PROUD TO HAVE COMMENT 69! Mmm. 69. Anyway THAT WAS SO FUCKIN HAWT GIRL! I need more now. I'm sorry I'm a greedy fucker. But that was really good. And I was like, sobbing going into this because I'm going through a rough family issue, but this really cheered me up. So thank you so much for that too. You're simply amazing :)
I love your a/n. xD "so to make up for it, i give you PORN" Oh man! xD I started laughing at that! Am I the only one who that that funny? -waits- Oh, okay, I guess I was... -awkwardly slips away- -jumps back- Hi! xD Omg I should really have slept more last night! AAAAANNNNYYYYYWWWWAAAAAYYYY!!!!!!! I love the chapter. And omfg, poor Frankie can't give himself pleasure! xD No, wait, poor Gee! He got the slap in the face! Okay, okay, before I get crazy again... BYYYEEE!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! <3
I read the chapter like 5 times, because I couldn't believe how rough Gerard was being. But it was a great chapter, because no matter how rough he was he managed to tell Frank that he loved him. Romantic and funny if you ask me. Anyway, you're doing a fantastic job with this story. Can't wait to read what you have in stored next. -Jenn.
Wow you should be slow at updating more. NO,I TAKE IT BACK, I TAKE IT BACK. Was so super good. Really love this story and all the lovely original ideas. Plus I adore Dom/Fertile story's so yeah. Yours is like epic and It hasn't been abandoned which inedietly make you a friend of mine. Woo go you. I totally cannot wait for the next chapter and am super excited for it.
I didn't need a special thanks but I am really flattere you gave it to me. I give credit where it's due and you really deserved it (: I loved the part where Frank said he'd pretend to be a cat. It's...ironic. I kinda want to see what Bob and Mikey are like together too. But yeah... I enjoyed this chapter, and that kinda makes me feel like a perv x)
Ahh, I loved it! :D It's my favorite Frank, horny and hormonal! I can't being to tell you how much I love werewolf fics and mpreg, and you mixed them together so this hit home for me, eeep c: Can't wait for the next update!
Ahh, I loved it! :D It's my favorite Frank, horny and hormonal! I can't being to tell you how much I love werewolf fics and mpreg, and you mixed them together so this hit home for me, eeep c: Can't wait for the next update!
Honestly this should have 184893020192992.9 more commenters. Because this is the best Dom/fertile story I have EVER read. I read a lot, and I've commented on two saying this is one of the best for sure, but this one certainly deserves the title of THE BEST. It has real plot and not just smut and teenagers getting it on and gettin pregnant and the fertile always crying because they feel like they aren't good enough. You developed a freaking story with the idea and I freaking love you for that. Seriously though. The best be ever read, better than the original Red Darnkess too which I'm assuming you've read. Plus with the whole mating part, magnificent. You really know how to make it feel like they're legit wolves and I don't know how to word my thoughts exactly. This is fantastic, and I'm going as far to say as one of my favorites in the whole of the Mibba universe. For me personally of course. Top five for sure of my favorites, ever. Not just Dom/fertile but regular pairings as well. I only read slash though, but I think it still counts. I love how every chapter begins, too. It's like a legit book if you ask me. It makes the story way better instead of being one that jumps right into everything. I won't lie, I hate reading narrative stories because I want to know when something happens exactly how it happens. I love suspense but at the same time I hate it. Anyway what I was saying. I write narratively myself which is ironic considering I don't read it much, but i loved this to death, and I loved all the narrative moments. A story is always good with less dialogue y'know? This is the longest comment in the world. Sorry. Though I'm sure you don't mind. Don't expect comments this large and with such proper grammar and detail, but do expect a comment every update from now on. I can't wait until the next chapter :)