Sweetie, You Had Me - Comments

Contest:
That was amazing. I felt really connected to the story and I couldn't tear my eyes away. Great job! :D

Wow, it's so good. I'm embarassed that my rubbishy writing is in the same contest as this. Like, wow, you totally blew my story out of the water......

This is just incredible.
Like, really incredible.

I know I tell you this all the time (well, I'm pretty sure I do) but sweetie, you're an amazing writer with such a brilliantly beautiful style. I love how you write, I really do.

And honestly, this story makes me want to cuddle Brendon and kiss his head over and over until he starts to feel better.

This story is amazing and I think I read it in 5 minutes! I couldn't put it down and read all the way to the end loving every word. I felt as if this story consumed me and I zoned out on everything else. This is a special story to be able to do that. I love Love LOVE! this story and hope you win the contest! Thank you for an amazingful one-shot!

Ooo, I like how you incorporated a Panic! At The Disco song, I love when stories do that. The story is actually pretty great, good job. I like that you did this story for a contest all based of a song, I think it's actually pretty hard to write all based on a song, and you did very well! There's no boring parts where I just want to skip reading, all of the story keeps me very captivated. It's written very well! Very good job!

First, I just want to say I really like your layout. It's simple, but looks great. I think you did a really good job using the song in this story. They way you used the lyrics as dialogue, it was believable and worked so well. Your descriptions were great as well! You could just get a good sense of all of the emotions in that scene. Great job!

The beginning was so great and captivating, it kept me on the edge of my seat waiting for Brendon's reaction. The layout is dark and reflects the story and its outline just lovely. Great descriptions. Great piece of writing.

This was really good it caught me instantly :)