Girls in the Summertime - Comments

I'm enjoying this story so far!
I've always had a thing for stories set during the summertime, makes everything more exciting. Liking Blake the best so far. Definitely going to keep my eyes on this story :)
Glad Comment Swap brought me here!

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lol, this was hilarious!!!

I think the idea for this story is so cool- three authors writing from three different points of view! Instead of one person trying to embody different characters you guys actually each took on different roles, and I think that's a really creative approach to writing. I'm glad your writing styles all go together so well, seeing as sometimes having multiple writing styles can make the story hard to read. Great job guys!

I think the idea for this story is so cool- three authors writing from three different points of view! Instead of one person trying to embody different characters you guys actually each took on different roles, and I think that's a really creative approach to writing. I'm glad your writing styles all go together so well, seeing as sometimes having multiple writing styles can make the story hard to read. Great job guys!

Comment swap brought me here, and I'm very happy that they did. This story is absolutely amazing! I love Patrick and Ronnie and how they were embarrassing Blake! Blake has to be one of my favorite characters, but who knows, that might change throughout the story!!! Update Soon, and don't ever think about giving this story up because it's awesome and beautifully written, and I'm so happy that you have a character description tab thingy, that really sealed the deal for me!
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Really good story! Giving each girl a chapter for an intro was nice, it gave a good insight to each character. I do think, however, that if you do keep this up, each girl gets her own chapter, the little things, like the dialogue between Blake and Allison, doesn't need to be repeated. You could say "I talked to Allison about sleeping over" or something. The paragraph of her thoughts about Steven was good though. All in all, great story!

Like what you guys are doing! Can't wait to read more!

I like Blake, she seems like a cool chick. Haha rubber ducky named Jackie? ;D You guys got a great story on your hand and amazing writing so far :)

I love this first chapter. A nice intro to Lucy and her relationships with friends/family. Great detail - I felt as if I was implanted in the story, easily picturing the story taking place in front of or around me. I cannot wait for more!

I like this :D I'm sure this is a good compliment when I say this is playing out like a teen movie in my head, it doesn't even feel like I'm reading another Mibba story, it feels....awesome :)

Nice first chapter. Can't wait for more!

Oh and may I ask what you used to make your banner?