Emery :'( Hopefully the running was someone coming to save him! Jorge needs to be locked up and poked with a pointy stick (the ultimate punishment ^_^) Please update more, this is my favourite story :D
A wild Emerson appeared! He used cuteness on Pharis. It's super effective! Haha had to write that :P I love the amount of depth you've given pretty much all the characters, it makes the story way more believable than loads I've read :D Yaaaaaaaay they've met! Who knew Pharis would be so sappy? C: Aww I like him like that, and I think Emery does too ;) (I'm allowed to call him Emery because we are obviously BFFs ;3)
Apple!!!!! I like it so far. I didn't think it was boring. I think you're properly characterizing them before everything happens, which is rather refreshing. Keep it up :)
apple every time :) and i dont think its boring - i like stories that introduce the characters properly before they're thrown together. the first chapters should be 'dull' in that there's not necessarily romance or drama but interesting because we learn about the characters. anyway, great chapter, can't wait for more!! :)