Everything You Want - Comments

this is perfect.

Great one shot! Yeah. I was laughing so hard with Halvo being a stripped. But for a one shot it had a pretty good thing about it! Great job! :D

I'm gonna have to massage my cheeks because I was grinning so much throughout this! Hahaa. I loved everything about it - seriously! When I read how John was feeling when "I" told him "I" was getting married, I wanted to just grab him and give him a big ole bear hug! Hahaa. And Halvo's little part made me laugh! I might've said 'yes' to the lap dance just to make fun of him! :P I can't tell you how relieved I was when I saw that "I" had spoken up and stopped the wedding. Honestly, I thought it was going to end with me marrying Kale and John just being a good friend, but you made me very happy! Lol. I'll probably read this over and over! Thank you so much, dude! :)