I really liked how you wrapped up the ending, and I thought you did a great job at describing Melinda's emotions and how she felt about having the photographs taken. It was very endearing.
June 6th, 2012 at 09:28am
Hello, I love the story. You did a very good job.
Although, you did misspell some things. Such as, you said 'piant' instead of 'paint'. I think I spotted another one, but I can't find it again, so that may have been my mind playing tricks. Anyway, very well done.