The Girl who got Lost in the Stereo - Comments

  • FellSoHard

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    Looking forward to more! :)
    June 19th, 2012 at 01:26pm
  • alltimefanfic

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    Hey it's me from theflavorofyourlipsfic.tumblr.com! Your writing and grammar are superb! Excellent story so far. :) The only thing I would suggest is to maybe space out your characters dialogues. <3
    June 5th, 2012 at 12:12am
  • sharminb

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    Can't wait for the next update!!!!! I'm glad I found this fic...alex is so up himself :D
    June 4th, 2012 at 02:59pm
  • Naturalbornidiot

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    Wow thats amazing so far, I must admit your an amazing writer, Can't wait to read the next part, hope you don't mind, found your link on Never Gonna Let You Go :)
    June 4th, 2012 at 02:53pm
  • nicolelala

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    Hey, it's me from Never Gonna Let You go fic! I like the story! You're grammar is fine. The only things that I would maybe do differently is state whose point of view it is and maybe space out when someone says something. Hope this helps! If you need anything else don't be afraid to ask me again!
    June 4th, 2012 at 05:21am