The Followed - Comments

Hello there. XD Well, let's get started, shall we???? :) Comment swap brought me to this story of yours. The layout is pretty good and the summary is writen nicely. I also liked the banner. I think you should edit it and add more details to it. It will make your story more interesting than it already is. The plot itself is amazing and I liked the unique names you used. You did a pretty good job writing this. Keep up the great work and share your imagination with me and the rest of your fans. XD

This is great. Keep it going.

Demi god. That word just instantly sparked my interest. I love stories like this. I'm glad comment swap bought me to it. I know it's still fresh, but honestly, I can't wait til you update. The story line is good.

The layout is simple. It meshes well with the story. Characters seems interesting so far. Keep up the great work!

The layout is simply magical, the summary is short and sweet, the banner is beautiful (I noticed all of that before I even started reading!) Oh Buckcherry really sets the mood ;) and her snarky attitude is hilarious but not overbearing.
Chapter one ideas: I love it! Yet, I think that the school needed more description I wasn't 'there' ya'know? The biggest problem you had was the lack of description- I felt like a few sentences here and there could've been added to add more depth to the overall feel- yet even without that you have an amazing female main character, wonderful plot, unique names that relate directly to the Greek theme! Research is something that I find to be VERY important and I can tell you've done your homework Bravo :))))) Happy Writing! (feel free to comment me back I love brainstorming especially with cool plots like yours!)

Love how modern and colloquial the writing style is - both chapters ( I believe they're by different authors?) flow well and the writing is very similar...
Liking the idea, not something I've seen on here before so excited to see how it progresses ++ what kind of genre this will turn out to be..

( also I have no idea what happened with the comments below so i apologise for spamming you!!)
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Love how modern and colloquial the writing style is - both chapters ( I believe they're by different authors?) flow well and the writing is very similar...
Liking the idea :)
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Love how modern and colloquial the writing style is - both chapters ( I believe they're by different authors?) flow well and the writing is very similar...
Liking the idea :)
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