Hmm, it is intriguing. It got me curious, alright. But it seems that there's something...missing. If I were you, I'd include more detail and description. I'm definitely subscribing!! Eager to see how the story progress! ;) PS: I'm writing a Sherlock Holmes story myself if you're interested.
First comment? hmm.. anyways, this could be interesting.. but it is after all only on the first short pilot/prolgue chapter. Giving it a shot anyways and subscribing.
I'm definitely subscribing!! Eager to see how the story progress! ;)
PS: I'm writing a Sherlock Holmes story myself if you're interested.