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  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    @ AnnaRambo
    haha that's awesome :)... what if SHE tries something?
    August 29th, 2012 at 01:57am
  • Theo Rossi;

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    The deal works. But if Corbin tries anything I will kill him myself.
    August 28th, 2012 at 10:31pm
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    @AnnaRambo

    I knew that was your opinion, what do you think of the deal?
    August 27th, 2012 at 06:53pm
  • Theo Rossi;

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    Cole and Lily forever. Nothing will change that.
    August 27th, 2012 at 01:39pm
  • Justice Rader

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    GRRRRRR!!!!!! Mad I'm Mad!!!!!!!!
    August 26th, 2012 at 08:39am
  • Theo Rossi;

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    This is amazing. I HATE Corbin. I really do. I'm gonna hurt him. I'm agreeing with helga12 you are an amazing writer:)
    August 25th, 2012 at 03:49pm
  • helga12

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    i love this !!! you are an amazing writer =] can't wait for the updates !! Smile
    August 21st, 2012 at 03:20pm
  • Puzzles Still Don't

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    I just read the first chapter and I enjoyed it. The only bad thing I have to say.. you might want to work on your dialogue. Think of your story as a movie and your head and ask yourself, "Would they really say that?" That's all. I really think this will turn out to be an amazing story line. Thanks for sharing it with me! <3
    August 21st, 2012 at 11:29am
  • DeleteAccount01

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    ooooo a ball, cant wait for that ^_^
    August 15th, 2012 at 01:32pm
  • Theo Rossi;

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    I love it:)
    August 15th, 2012 at 05:55am
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    awwww cole and lilly are just toooo cute n_n
    August 10th, 2012 at 05:24pm
  • xxkilljoypresentsxx

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    Ohmygod..
    I cant breatghtthhh >.< ahaha!
    you had me cracking up when alex was eating cole's chips in the bathroom and that scene was just fucking awesome !! ahaha thunder cunt !?!?! you my friend..are an awesome writer! I'm going to stick to this story till the end freaking badass !!! >.<♥
    August 9th, 2012 at 09:22am
  • Kiwi9400

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    AHHH Love it! Nick is an asshole! and Cole is sooo sweet :') Can't wait for more
    August 9th, 2012 at 09:20am
  • xxkilljoypresentsxx

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    Ohmygod!!!>.<
    This story is so freaking funny !!
    ahahahahahaa!! xDD
    im sorry but i just had to inform you xP
    August 9th, 2012 at 07:53am
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    oh never mind, those weren't her real parents ??
    But still..I'm still laughing >.<
    awesome story bro !!
    August 9th, 2012 at 07:47am
  • Kiwi9400

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    What do they mean when they say they give it a week.. a week til what?
    August 9th, 2012 at 07:46am
  • xxkilljoypresentsxx

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    ahha, im barely on the first chapter but I found it amusing how she didn't take her parents death hard on the spot.It was like she cared more about how he was checking her out instead of her parents death.. lmao but i like it so far >.< hahaha!
    subscribed.♥
    August 9th, 2012 at 07:42am
  • Theo Rossi;

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    This is good, and now the slurs.... I hope Lily punches one of them. It'd funny.
    August 9th, 2012 at 06:39am
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    ghepaihgnapoehipniad AHHH!! n_n
    update soooooon!
    August 7th, 2012 at 05:47pm
  • Theo Rossi;

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    My ego has gotten bigger. Cole is always the better choice, and again waiting sucks! And Nick got what he deserved.
    August 3rd, 2012 at 06:12am
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