Nova. - Comments

Okay, so at first I didn't like Delilah because she seemed too innocent, but then she got all seductive and creepy but then she actually turned out to be pretty cool. WHO IS SHE DATING? IS THIS BOY A BOY OF COLOR? DOES RHETT FINALLY HAVE SOMEONE TO RELATE TO? I hope they become friends or something because that'd be nice. AND FINALLY RHETT AND NOVA ARE A COUPLE. I seriously thought that they were never gonna establish their relationship.

Also, I know he wasn't in the newest chapter, but I don't know how I feel about Drake. I mean he seems like a pretty decent guy, but what are his intentions with dearest Nova? He better not mess up Rhenova (that's my ship name for them) or else someone's getting spanked (yes, I want to spank Drake).

Update soon, gucci.

Aw :( poor Rett. I'm a horrible liar so I'd never get through a day with a fake relationship lol I'm an open book in most parts and then I'm somewhat of an expert liar when it doesn't come to relationships lol. I have no idea how to feel about Drake, I just don't know man. I need to get a better feel for him soooo... update, pls! I need more Rhett & Nova feels<3

PS . THERE WILL NEVER BE A SAMANTHA. RHETT AND SAM SOUNDS WRONG.

sorry, double post.

Wow this is amazing! It's so original too. I've only had the time to read the first two chapters but I'll be catching up later! :3 One thing I will say is it is a little bland when it comes to description. You have a good writing style but it needs more descriptions. Other then that, this is awesome and very original story line! <3

This story is so cute, I cried while reading some of the chapters and smiled while reading all of the others! I love this story, I've subscribed and recommended, I love it so much, & it kind of hits home, because I'm kind of in an interracial relationship.
I hope you continue the story, it's amazing.

This story is incredibly good :)

OMFG RHETT AND NOVA ARE SO CUTE ALKJAJDHLKSJFKFKLAGLKG
I love how she's like rhett stop staring at me and then he's like but you're so pretty
SERIOUSLY NOVA
HE IS A KEEPER
AND HE LIKES YOU
SO GET WITH HIM
AND PROVE EVERYONE WRONG
AND RUB IT IN WHAT'S HER NAME'S FACE
okay her name is rosalyn
yeah rub it in her face
because she's a bitch and doesn't deserve rhett's kindness
anyway, bee you should update soon <3

Wow. I was sent here from Comment Swap, and I have to honestly say that this is very-well written. I like that you are pointing out things that still do happen now. I know how it feels to go to a school where you are so different than everyone else and they expect you to be stupid basically.

You have talent sweetheart, seriously. Nova is a character that though she is quiet and minds her business she's also strong in her own discrete way.
As I said before this is well written, I'm glad Comment Swap brought me here, definitely going to wait for the next update. This story is going to go far. :)

I'll be honest, Comment Swap brought me here, but how glad I am that it did! It has drawn me in completey and thoroughly, and I am anxiously awaiting an update.

I am curious as to what time period this is based in, because often it seems like a fifties-sixties setting, but the use of cell phones confuses me a little.

Sorry its not a terribly constructive comment, my phone is glitching out, but you are an amazing writer witth incredible talent. I can see you taking this far.

This is a very interesting viewpoint. I like that you have written such a unguarded story about the racism that has plagued countries. You have a very nice writing style, though I feel it's too clean. Weird word, right? But it's too "she did this, she felt this." You should add some more description. Your layout is beautiful though.

This is oh so lovely, I'm serious. I love it.
I was not expecting her not to be causeasian, but maybe I should have from your warning x3 It's not that often I find a story on Mibba where the lead character isn't white, and I love that. This story promises to be super interesting.
And I have to admit, what really drew me in was the chapter title, Marina & The Diamond lyrics -I love her to death, and always find it a surprise when others do as well, since no one knows her where I'm from. And then at the end, with more lyrics, I had to subscribe. The story had so much, PLUS Marina?
Oh yes. Well done.

I'm confused. Comment swap brought me here but all I see is a summary.

Hm.

Anyway, I'll try commenting on this anyway. I like the banner, and the layout. They tell me that this is a dark story, although I'm not quite sure.

Judging from the other comments, I take it you've deleted the first chapter or something like that. I think I'll come back when you've posted it up so I can leave you a better comment than this :)

Bee, just... wow.
This is so powerful and raw and ugh, you are one of the most amazing writers on Mibba! I'm serious!

You always know how to capture a reader's attention with your perfectly written out scenes and impeccable word choices and everything just flow's so nicely. Can you please share some of you awesomeness with me?

And don't even get me started on the characters! Nova is so wonderful and so misunderstood all at once. I really can relate to her, maybe not with the racism, but with feeling like different and weird around white people. When I was younger, like maybe five or six, my best friend was white and I'd always feel, I don't know, like out of place because she and I came from different backgrounds. So... yeah. I also really love Rhett. He's so nice and cute and asekjwfkj uGH LOVE ME. I'm glad he's not all crazy like that stupid chick--is her name Susie? I think I'm gonna call her Susie. (see? she's so stupid that I forgot her name!) And Amelia is really cute too. SHOUT OUT TO THE CUTE, UNRACIST SIBLINGS.

Sorry that this comment doesn't even make sense.
I got lost in the amazingness of this story and I don't even know because you've left me speechless!
Well, I'm gonna go ahead and subscribe and recommend and all that jazz.
This is wonderful, i luv u, and update soon!!!11!1!!~~~~

Your word choice was brilliant. It was right in the middle of too little and too much, which I really like. I fell in love with the characters. They were very believable in my opinion. I didn't see any grammar or spelling mistakes. Keep writing!

I think that you have a great style of writing, and this is very original. The characters were believable, and they had great personalities. I also did not pick up on any grammar mistakes. I think that you have a great skill, and you should keep writing!

I've been stalking you lately. I know. Apologies, but your stories tend to be so well-written that I can't not stalk you. I wanted to know what this story was about so badly that I copy-pasted the text onto an empty document and read it on there. First off, beautiful layout, as usual! The picture is pretty and it drags me in to read the story~ Also i love how you used Marina lyrics as the first chapter that really fit the premise of this story.

And, speaking of the premise of this story, it's so deep and dark that I love it. It's a very realistic, nope-not-gonna-sugar-coat-this-shit-for-you type of story which I ADORE. And it's the topic of racism, which I also adore (I don't adore racism, of course, but I adore facing the topic head on without any fluff).

I wanted to assume Nova was black but just because she's a person of color doesn't mean she's black. But I also like it that you don't explicitly say her race; it leaves it to the reader's imagination. Nova seems like a girl which so much promise, but self-hatred and the area in which she lives is drags her down. Her character seems like a multi-dimensional character so far, and I can't way to see her progress as a person.

And oh god that school. I've never had to go through that blatant racism before, but it seems so hard and heart-wrenching. Those judging eyes, those whispers, the evil kids picking on her for being a different race. It was a painful read, but in a good way. And it was all very realistic and descriptive; I love it gosh.

And this may be a touchy subject, but I feel like Nova kind of reflects you, no? People tend to write stories based on their personality/thoughts/experiences, and I feel like this story reflects you in a way, although it may be quick to say since I don't know you that well. I guess just the way you describe how the white children are "pretty" and have "nice white skin" and "blonde hair" makes me feel like you've once had these thoughts, but I guess only you know the truth. I don't want to come to a wrong conclusion on you, so correct me if I'm wrong.

I wonder how this story will turn out! I'm very excited, because I'm wondering if she'll find true love, she'll find peace with herself, or if she'll just run into tragedy and mishaps in the end. I hope you stick with this story because I know with your beautiful writing skills you'll make this a wonderful, book-worthy story.

Subscribing and recommended, OF COURSE. So much promise here <333

And I know I should probably write constructive criticism as well as positives, but it's too early in the game to make any constructive comments. The first chapter is perfect as it is; I didn't catch any grammatical errors or such. Keep writing!

OHHHH~
Is this the super secret project you were telling me about? I mean, I was snooping through your recs and I saw the link that said Nova.
And now I'm all "WELL SPEAK OF THE DEVIL."
Okay, so lemme go subscribe and recommend now.