She Walks in Beauty - Comments

@ redcurlygirl_45
Hello!
Thank you for your comment and thank you for your support! I am going to try and update as soon as possible.

Omg, I don't think I have ever read so fast in my life. That was a sad chapter but it was really good!! Good job, canny wait for the next one to see what they name the baby and see how Paty I doing.

@ teenagedream91
That would have been too much for my poor heart.

@ teenagedream91
That would have been too much for my poor heart.

@ BlueDreams
If you were evil Paty would have died in that car crash along with Alvaro now that would be tragic and evil.

@ ohhnoosui
I cried too, trust me. It was really hard to write this.

@ Dannichappell
Hello!
You're too kind, thank you darling!

Noooo. I cried. So hard: ( but the baby is safe, he loved her so much he saved her. I cant wait til the next one i am sure it would be heartbreaking as well

Nooooo Alvaro!! I cannot wait for the next chapter! ! I just wish this story wasn't ending soon!! Update soon!

@ teenagedream91
I know haha you know me well enough though, my ability to be evil isn't THAT evil.

@ BlueDreams
Evil isn't even the beginning lol jk I love you doll and we all abbé to be evil to our characters sometimes

@ teenagedream91
I just *screams internally* I am evil haha

@ BlueDreams
okay I know some people tend to go through a loop and such XD I forgot the baby is a girl, but girls have boy names all the time haha. It is going to be heartbreaking when she realizes that Alvaro saved her.

@ teenagedream91
My goodness no. No more tragedies with babies, one story was enough.
The baby is a girl though so I'm not sure they can do that but it killed me to write this. Her reaction will just be heartbreaking.

I had a feeling either Alvaro was going to die or Bryce was for some reason when I started reading this chapter and then when I saw Paty getting into the car, I was like oh god she's going to write another tragic baby scenario again. So you surprised me a bit when you didn't XD we are all about the drama darling and you did fantastic. I am gutted that Alvaro died and it happens with race car drivers it's a dangerous sport. I think in some way they are going to pay tribute to their decease friend by naming the child after him or adding it as the baby's middle name.

@ KillJoySynner
Luckily, their baby survived but it's premature and that can be very difficult.

@ BlueDreams
I was about to cry, cuz I finally caught up, and I thought she was gonna lose the baby and thinking of Tom's face when its sad made me thingn of Loki's face when he found out he wasnt Odins biological son

@ KillJoySynner
Thank you dear! Glad I could surprise, despite how sad it is.

:O did not see that coming! Loved it very much!

@ BlueDreams
It is.