January 12th, 2014 at 01:23pm
She Walks in Beauty - Comments
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Omg, I don't think I have ever read so fast in my life. That was a sad chapter but it was really good!! Good job, canny wait for the next one to see what they name the baby and see how Paty I doing.January 12th, 2014 at 05:26am
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@ teenagedream91
That would have been too much for my poor heart.January 12th, 2014 at 04:54am -
@ teenagedream91
That would have been too much for my poor heart.January 12th, 2014 at 04:53am -
@ BlueDreams
If you were evil Paty would have died in that car crash along with Alvaro now that would be tragic and evil.January 12th, 2014 at 04:05am -
@ ohhnoosui
I cried too, trust me. It was really hard to write this.January 11th, 2014 at 08:57pm -
@ Dannichappell
Hello!
You're too kind, thank you darling!January 11th, 2014 at 08:56pm -
Noooo. I cried. So hard: ( but the baby is safe, he loved her so much he saved her. I cant wait til the next one i am sure it would be heartbreaking as wellJanuary 11th, 2014 at 03:49pm
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Nooooo Alvaro!! I cannot wait for the next chapter! ! I just wish this story wasn't ending soon!! Update soon!January 11th, 2014 at 02:50pm
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@ teenagedream91
I know haha you know me well enough though, my ability to be evil isn't THAT evil.January 11th, 2014 at 01:49pm -
@ BlueDreams
Evil isn't even the beginning lol jk I love you doll and we all abbé to be evil to our characters sometimesJanuary 11th, 2014 at 05:47am -
@ teenagedream91
I just *screams internally* I am evil hahaJanuary 11th, 2014 at 04:37am -
@ BlueDreams
okay I know some people tend to go through a loop and such XD I forgot the baby is a girl, but girls have boy names all the time haha. It is going to be heartbreaking when she realizes that Alvaro saved her.January 11th, 2014 at 04:31am -
@ teenagedream91
My goodness no. No more tragedies with babies, one story was enough.
The baby is a girl though so I'm not sure they can do that but it killed me to write this. Her reaction will just be heartbreaking.January 11th, 2014 at 04:29am -
I had a feeling either Alvaro was going to die or Bryce was for some reason when I started reading this chapter and then when I saw Paty getting into the car, I was like oh god she's going to write another tragic baby scenario again. So you surprised me a bit when you didn't XD we are all about the drama darling and you did fantastic. I am gutted that Alvaro died and it happens with race car drivers it's a dangerous sport. I think in some way they are going to pay tribute to their decease friend by naming the child after him or adding it as the baby's middle name.January 11th, 2014 at 04:27am
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@ KillJoySynner
Luckily, their baby survived but it's premature and that can be very difficult.January 11th, 2014 at 04:26am -
@ BlueDreams
I was about to cry, cuz I finally caught up, and I thought she was gonna lose the baby and thinking of Tom's face when its sad made me thingn of Loki's face when he found out he wasnt Odins biological sonJanuary 11th, 2014 at 04:19am -
@ KillJoySynner
Thank you dear! Glad I could surprise, despite how sad it is.January 11th, 2014 at 04:04am -
:O did not see that coming! Loved it very much!January 11th, 2014 at 04:00am
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@ BlueDreams
It is.January 7th, 2014 at 03:29am
Hello!
Thank you for your comment and thank you for your support! I am going to try and update as soon as possible.