She Walks in Beauty - Comments

Love Love Loved It!!! It was so sweet! Not too over the top but just enough for Paty and Tom!! I found it really sweet when he asked her is she thought he was gonna run away. I think Paty knew deep down in her heart that he wouldn't do that to her. So sweet! Good job.

@ BlueDreams
me too. it just sounds weird after using it so many times. i find, love or darling more endearing than baby or babe. because every time i hear baby or babe some asshole is trying to win back the girl by cooing that name and it sickens me

@ teenagedream91
I try to use it very little, I prefer other names.

@ BlueDreams
Ah yeah I find it weird to use it. I use the word sometimes in my stories but not much. It's not overwhelming like some writers when they overuse it lol

@ teenagedream91
It's actually curious that you say that because I detest the 'baby' or 'babe' form of treatment, I can't explain why.

@ BlueDreams
No you don't go overboard like some people. Some writers always add 'baby' or 'babe' in every freaking sentence when the main characters get together and it gets pretty annoying. Its just over the top and I instantly stop reading it after that, some stories were really good but the overuse of those words calling each other baby or babe every single second kills it for me.

@ teenagedream91
Haha we still have a few things happening but the end is near yes. our babies, indeed!
Well, I feel even more flattered now because I'm always afraid to be too cheesy but thank you for your words darling! I'm glad you like mine.
That's true *sighs* I'd love to ride in it.

@ BlueDreams
It is? I'm so bummed XD our babies!
You are probably the only one that I don't mind reading some of your cheesiness lol I'm such a picky reader. I don't even read much on this site anymore.
Yes the car is gorgeous who wouldn't want to drive themselves around in that?

@ teenagedream91
Yes, your assumption is the right. The story is almost over.
I'm so glad to hear that you like and can take my chessyness. I feel so lucky and flattered!
Their vows must be my masterpiece from this week haha and yes! Isn't the car so so so beautiful? Haha I thought about a carriage but going back to Lisbon in that would be difficult and he wanted to drive himself. What man would lose the chance? Now, honeymoon!

I always been excited for their wedding and I know we discussed it around a year ago what we were going to do and my goodness I can't believe it's finally here. With a few more chapters I'm assuming the story is going to be over. I'm a bit sad over that but I'm happy they are getting their happy ending. You always make me fall in move with your characters even though I'm not a mushy type person and usually backtrack when it gets overbearing but not once have I done that. Paty and toms vows were just perfect. The vintage car is a classic touch and I am in love with it *.* for some reason I thought he was going to get a carriage instead lol i don't know why

@ redcurlygirl_45
I'm not really sure yet darling so I can't really say, I'm sorry :3 I am going with the flow ;)
You're not a bad reader! *hugs* at least you enjoy the story and that is what is most important to me <3

I'm always excited to read your updates. I love this story. But I never know what to say so I don't really say much. Sorry I know I'm a bad reader. :(

I know this is asking a lot and you probably won't tell me....but is it just gonna be their wedding or is it their honeymoon too? :)

@ redcurlygirl_45
I'm writing as we speak and I hope to have the chapter published as soon as possible :D I'm happy to see you so excited!

I can't wait to find out! And I can't wait till their wedding and their honeymoons. I can't wait to find out what their reactions are gonna be to each others surpises!!!

@ redcurlygirl_45
Hello :D
Oh don't worry, you'll find out soon enough eheh

OMG! I bet Tom is off doing something really sweet! Buying her something or planing a surprise. idk but I figure it is going to be something sweet!

@ teenagedream91
You'll see where he is. I can't stop laughing at that haha
Wasn't is lovely? Those two are just really adorable together but then, of course, that they had to be separate at their last night together.
And drunk Tom will be appearing once more in the near future, you'll see :) This appearance was sweet though, he missed her.
Oh love *hugs* thank you for taking the time to comment despite being so tired. Thank you.

No theories on Tom's disappearance, but not really worried. It was lovely how they spent their remaining days as being single. Paty got over her fear of horses and they had a romantic experience on the beautiful boat ride. My brain is a little shot from all the studying I have been doing so I can't think of anything else to say...oh! Drunk Tom made another appearance!!! What a funny sight and cannot wait for the future chapters that we have been discussing :)

@ teenagedream91
I understand what you mean, honestly.