What If? - Comments

I found this story through comment swap. I know very little about Sherlock, but I do know a tad bit about who Rose Tyler is; I'm still intrigued by her brave, if not brash decision to absorb the time vortex and become the "Bad Wolf". Because I vaguely know who she is and how much the Doctor loved her, the plot twist you put in chapter 2 hit me hard, even though I'm not a bona fide Doctor Who fan. I always appreciate unpredictable plot twists that simultaneously manage to hurt my heart, and you certainly succeeded! I can see too, why the Doctor and Sherlock would get along swell. Their immense wit and intellect easily helps them connect. Excellent story!

This is a well written story. Are you ever coming back to write more? I think you should because the chapters were well put together. The art of writing is dying but it's people like you that restores my faith that it hasn't :D

My sister is obsessed with both shows, so I like to think I have a bit of understanding. Even still, some things remained confusing, but this okay because there were literally so few that it didn't take from the overall enjoyment of the story. Further, you gave me a clear understanding and attachment to the characters despite my lack of knowledge and that helped beyond words as well as it being impressive for you as a writer!

I love how there are multiple stories within the one and there were very small amounts of grammatical errors, so small that they're not even worth identifying.

I really can't stress enough on how much I adored the characters. I love how you wrote Sherlock, and if it really matches Benedict Cumberbatch's portrayal of the already phenomenal character, then I might just have to check the series out!

I can't wait to see Rory's reaction to seeing Pondy in the other dimension. What a cliffhanger! I need the next update...and BAD! You've absolutely gained a subscriber despite the time lapse of two years of silence.

I found this through Commnt Swap. And....OH MY GOD!!! Its so well written, and I am the biggest Doctor Who geek:3 I have never read Sherlock Holmes books, but I have seen the movie. Obviously the book would be much better than the film though. Sorry, going off subject. Ah yes, your story is absolutely amazing! Keep it up!!:D

Wow, I just read the first chapter, but this seems very intriguing and caught my interest straight off the bat. I do not like the layout, but that was far from my concern since you completely brought me in with your fantastic writing.

Really caught me off guard from the summary since it seemed a bit dull. Congratulations for winning my heart over! Good luck on this.

Hey there, so I've never seen Dr. Who so I wouldn't really have read this without comment swap. Comment swap has given me many amazing stories and this is one of them. Grammar, spelling, everything is perfect. I greatly enjoyed this story and keep up the good work:)

I found this through comment swap, and as it happens most of the time, this is definitely not something i would usually read, but i always give them a chance :) your grammar and everything is great, you did an amazing job at putting this together :) If i was a fan of Dr. Who/ Sherlock, I would probably love this

Nice chapter ... love this story :D

Pondy this is perfect okay bby.

You're wonderful, you KNOW you're wonderful and I shouldn't have to even tell you. This strange mix is the most asdfghjkl perfect thing ever and if you don't update soon I may have to kill you :)

With love and heartache,
Vincey Princey xxx

I've landed at the fanfic as a result of the wonderful comment swap and as we all know - comment swap doesn't always give us fanfics that we'd usually read. This is one of those fanfics. I watch Dr. Who every now and again when nothing else is on t.v and I enjoy it - but I couldn't openly admit that I know a lot about the characters etc, especially Matt Smith because I preferred David Tennant, hehe :) & Sherlock I have never seen but my Tumblr dash is always filled with it.

However, I gave your first chapter a read because I didn't want to turn it away just because it's a fic that doesn't hold my interest. In fact - your first chapter actually did hold my interest!

I really like your sentence structure. Some people would complain about a run on of sentences but in this case I find it remotely effective. It flows with your writing style :)

Your grammar and spelling in this chapter is impeccable in my opinion. I have failed to notice any minor errors so that's a good sign, yes?

As I'm not a Dr. Who/Sherlock fan I doubt I would be able to survive this fic knowing how true to the real characters you are in this story - but I'm sure a lot of people who are a part of the fandoms will enjoy this a lot!

Keep up the good work sunshine! :]

I have to admit I know basically nothing about Sherlock. I haven't watched Doctor Who either, aside from bits and pieces of random episodes, but from what I know of it and read about it on Tumblr, I think it's definitely an interesting show.

And this story only adds to my curiousity about the show. I very much enjoy how you manage to mix two shows. And how you manage to keep it understandable for people who know nothing about the shows. You have a very nice writing style as well, it flows so well and it's easy to read.

Very interesting and intriguing story!

Oh, and on a random note: I also like how you use Muse songs for the chapter titles :).

this is great wonderful even i love you r detailed descriptions and how you have described the characters behavior as almost if they were actually there acting out the story its a great way to merge the doctor and Sherlock together .i absolutely love both Sherlock and doctor who so can find this enjoyable and somewhat intriguing i cant wait to read more of this at its a truly great story :)x

Like the person below me, I don't know about Sherlock Holmes; I'm sorry about that. I'm also here for the Mibba comment swap.
But when I read your two chapters, I liked the thrill that you really weaved into it. I also liked how you added the whole "we're from an alternate universe" idea to explain the settings more. It was quite convincing xD Anyway, the details also really caught my eye. Great job, love
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I have aboslutely no idea who/what Doctor Who is, and I've never been interested about Sherlock so I'll just let you know that I was brought here from the Comment Swap.

So, the first chapter really surprised me, it took me long enough to figure out with the 'little boy'. But I loved it.

Chapter two were perfect though it confused me a bit.

But other than that, I love your writing style and that you describe the thing a lot.
I liked this story so far :)

Then only thing I know about Doctor Who is what a girl in my class taught when she gave a speech on it. & I'm to take a guess and think that you mean Sherlock Holmes? (I could be completely wrong) But I'm going to read this anyways and see what you did with this. (:

I've read the first chapter and I'm pleasantly surprised. I don't think I could write simple mysteries like that. My brain would figure out that toys meant children but not continue far enough to speculate that a broken action figure means little boy.

Chapter two confused me slightly. Since I honestly don't have much prior knowledge about this stuff (besides the movies) I wasn't sure who was speaking since it said "AMY" at the top. But I really like that they don't know that they're fictional characters. That's kind of cool. (:

The only tip I have is to explain the specific details that come from Doctor Who & Sherlock Holmes. It'll make it a little easier to understand for people like me. (:

But good job! I did like it. It's very creative.

I am not a part of either of these fandoms, I don't like crossover fanfiction in general, but I would like to commend you for having a beautiful writing style. Your grammar and spelling seem to be on spot, and everything technical seems to be in working order. Your layout is quite lovely, and it's completely readable which is very refreshing.

Oh my goodness!!! Finally a Sherlock Holmes fanfiction and Doctor Who. I love the though stories. It interesting the way you intertwined them together. I would of never thought their would be a day someone would come up with a story like this. I am interested to see how this comes out

I'm not quite familiar with either one of these shows/movies. However, it's beautifully written. I'm hoping that you'll make a layout for this because it could be really cool and interesting, just like your story! I'm interested on where this is going.
Keep writing (:

I'm not really familiar with Sherlock Holmes or Doctor Who, so I don't really know their MOs or anything. But I really enjoyed reading this! It is definitely unique; I've never read anything like it before. I am definitely looking forward to how this story is going to play out!

I absolutely love Sherlock Holmes, especially Robert Downey Jr.'s portrayal of him! I think this story is very interesting and definitely unique. You did a good job mixing to the two worlds, which is very hard to do! I am very proud of you and I can't wait to see where this story goes!