Hope Never Fades Away - Comments

her father let his friends rape her for money so tht he can keep the house thts fucked up, thn Jimmy told her not to tell the family becuz there was already problems goin on with her sister but by thn she was goin to leave anyways....wow this story is crazy, Jimmy got slapped, I think Brian was goin to beat Jimmy up or go after Jada's dad idk but now Jada is knocked out cold while there is chaos goin around, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I love it. He "dad" Should be knocked out. update soon.

more soon please i love this so much

I love this story. Update soon<3

Well apparently she confronted Jason after she was accused of cheating dude seriously u have room to talk and thn on top of tht u beat her like seriously u r definitely fired soo don't come back becuz next time Brian will do more damage on ur ass....now who in the hell raped her, was it someone tht she knows or someone close to the family, and she has an eating disorder she needs to help with tht becuz one she can bruise easily, get sick easily and can kill herself like tht..can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I love this story, never give up on in it sweetie :D. Please update soon

I really like this story, I think ur use of witch and which in a different context sooo make sure u r using the correct witch/which in ur sentences.......other than tht wat was her secret was she pregnant with one of the guys baby, did she kill someone what did she do tht may her not trust Jimmy ever again, I want to kno and when is she goin to confront Jason about him cheating on her with tht Brendy chick......can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

i know i'm working hard on that tho because i don't speak fluent english but as for her past that's to come sooon thks for commenting

I like the story, but it's a little hard to understand. Your sentences are a little unstructured and choppy. The story itself is a little vague I'd like to find out more about the main character and her past, but I assume that will happen in the chapters soon to come.