This Is Summer - Comments

I like this, update soon (:

Wow, hello. Comment swap brought me here.
Your story is definitely interesting, although things happen a little too fast for more taste, but that's just me. All in all, I like the idea so far, and hope you continue on with it. Also, a little background info on the characters would be nice, but I assume that will come later in the story. This is great so far, and I wish you the best of luck with the rest.

-Jess xx

Comment swap sent me here again and since my preview comments were repeated like three time well that made me mad, but well I'm just saying. Is not my fault, but well anyways I'm sorry for leaving a lot of comments behind, it wasn't my intention :/ but since comments can not be deleted (I guess) then I have to let them there, ugh how horrible, but anyways keep going in your story, is good and update soon.

My eyes were like this the entire time O_O yeah, like that. Things run too quickly in here, but it is good, it makes you wonder and make questions. Keep writing because it is good.

My eyes were like this the entire time O_O yeah, like that. Things run too quickly in here, but it is good, it makes you wonder and make questions. Keep writing because it is good.

My eyes were like this the entire time O_O yeah, like that. Things run too quickly in here, but it is good, it makes you wonder and make questions. Keep writing because it is good.

hi im a comment swapper. i liked your story i just wish there was some mor background information. i really like jersey's character. your layout is simple and works well with your story making it easier to read. good luck with the rest of your stories :)

Write some more please!

This was really good..and I can't wait for more:D

So this is the 2nd ATL fanfic comment swap has offered me and I'm still yet to be disappointed. Honestly, I like where this is going, it's a great opening chapter. Though I would have liked a little more background information but perhaps you'll add that into the next chapter?

Also I love how you've portrayed the characters of Jack and Zack so accurately to what they're like in real life!

Keep up the good work! I'll be subscribing to this story, I'm interested to see where it goes!:)

The summary was really well written - attention grabbing and very catchy. Straight to the point, I like it! The first chapter is also really great, you capture the personalities of all the characters you mention really well and I can totally imagine All Time Low saying some of what you've written! I love Jersey's character... It just seems really natural! Xx

The summary was great and it really made me want to read what this was. I loved the way that you made the characters so real and the dialog sounds very professional. There may be a few errors in the grammar that could use a few touches here and there, but that is only half the battle when it comes to plot. You have got that part in the bag! I subscribed because I really want to know where this is going.

Okay I am going to be completely truthful.I like the idea of having the photographer and journalist or whatever hanging out with them, but I'm not really into the whole just-met-you-now-text-me and the -i"ll-screw-any-guy-I-see.And it was all a bit rushed. So yeaaa.The grammar and punctuation were all perfect,but I just couldn't get into the plot. Great job though.

I really like the humor and witty conversations in this. I love a story that can make me laugh but has depth to it as well. Kinley seems like a very interesting character and I have a feeling her ’game’ is going to stir up some drama which her sister probably won’t be too happy about, but is always enjoyable to read. I will definitely be subscribing and patiently wait for more. :)

This is a brilliant start! Warped Tour isn't one of the most original story settings but I have a feeling this is going to be different from most 'Warped Tour romance' stories! You are a great writer and you really portray the band members' characters well and have created an entertaining start. I can't wait for more; keep it up!

First of all, I like the title. I definitely thought it said "This is Sparta" when I first clicked, it though! Whoops! I like the story. It's not the most original idea, but your execution makes up for that. You're a really good writer which makes this story stand out from all the other band fictions out there!

This is a good, original idea and I really like it so far! Comment Swap brought me here and I'm happy it did. I love All Time Low, so the fact that Alex is a main character is great!! You have a nice writing style. The layout is easy to read and there a minimal grammatical errors. I can't wait to see how this is going to play out. Good idea! Keep it up!!

This is kind of different for me; I don't usually read band fiction, so I'm not really familiar with any of the characters. But so far this story sounds entertaining, so I'm definitely going to keep checking on it for updates! This is really well-written, keep up the good work!

I don’t usually read band fiction, so this was very different for me. I have heard of All Time Low, just because my boyfriend listens to them, but Ididn’t know any of the band members, so it was a lot like reading an original fiction for me. I still liked it and I liked how you added a lot of the character's personality. It was really easy to get a feel for each of the characters. I think this is a really great first chapter!

So this story has a lot of things I love. First off All Time Low! Tons of humor, and a good story plot! I try to read all of the all time low stories I can and some are okay. But I think this one may be in the top 10! Even though it's just on chapter one, I have a feeling that this story will be great! I love the way Kinley interacts with everyone, especially Zack! You write her character extremely well!! I can't wait for the next chapter to appear and see what happens! I am so glad I found this story because it's great!! Keep up the awesome work :) !!!!