okay, so I'm going to be blunt. I found myself skipping through chapter's because most of it's just copy and paste. I found it boring when I had to do that. All I could think of was, these people have good talent on writing, they just don't put the umph into it. And I'll be honest, my first story I had, when I changed POV's I did the same. Am I dogging on you guys? Hah, NO! I just want to help you both as a writer myself. :3 I love the relationship you guys have with eachother, it's like me and my two co-authors... Though we wanna have fits too. Also. CAPITALIZE I's, I'm severily ocd on that. :3 Don't kill me. I have band camp in a week, I can't miss that. 83 pweeeeease. I live in hell on earth, so, yeah, that'd be punishment enough with the burn marks on my hands.
Absolutely a great story! I'm nott going to lie, I spent my entire day reading this story. I couldn't stop reading it! So sad to see it end. I wonder if a sequal is brewing *hint hint* :)
Funny things happen when i read and listen to music. just read chapters 23 and 24 and the whole time i read those chapters, blood on the dance floor was playing and thpose 2 chapters can be summed up with frankenstein + the bride, loveotomy, and love conquers all
Can I please marry you two? ^_^ Y'all use the best references in your author's notes, and, not to mention, the story is brilliant, too! Anyone down for polygamy here? ;D