Here's the Thing, It's... Complicated - Comments

wow! i really like that this story is based on dreams in a way, first of all. and second of all, im really into sexual scenes and i think the idea behind the one you included was great. Zebastian is too sweet and i really like him...can i have him? haha, i really like this story!

This was an extremely interesting read! Not gonna lie, didn't really know what it was based on or that it was a fanfic, sometimes I just kind of close my eyes and click around until I land on a story and read it, but it was a great read even for someone who has nooo idea what it was based on! I like the skate park scene the most, just because it was one of those super romantic loveatfirstsight things. My only critque would be that the story seems too fast paced. Maybe try and add some freeze frame description type stuff?
But over all really good, you should add more to it!

@ Vengenz6661
Thank you :)

I love this so far! It's great to finally find a recent Rasmus fic. Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more:)

I like it, ad I like the dream theory! I do like Lauri more then Bam though, (im sorry just not a big Bam fan I guess!) But its god and usually I have some criticism but I liked it alot, not very much to criticize. The fact (like the two bottom comments mentioned) that she has to stay is a little weird, but I like that because its a story, and mostly a dream, you are taking control and making it so that there doesn't need to be a reason for her to stay, its your story. It's upsetting to me that she has to leave though, I enjoy Lauri very much! But as I said, your story is your story and I am not writing it! I like how I thought it was going a little too fast and then I realized that you wanted it to be fast, that it all fell into the plan of the story, which was an excellent twist, since usually when a story is fast pace its rather bothersome!

Thank you all for your comments :) MERK this is a prequal to the main story so there will be more Bam in here for definite :) Glad you guys all enjoyed it and I am writing Chapter five right now!

I thoroughly enjoy your story. Something about that Bam... ;) I am kinda upset that we're leaning toward this Lauri character, though. I shall be Team Bam until further notice or you convince me otherwise. :) I'm a grammar freak to certain extents so I did notice slight errors. We all make mistakes, though. I'm sure I've messed up just writing this comment. What's broke can be mended, though. Moral of this novel of a comment, though, is that you should keep writing!

I am not a big fan of fan fiction, but I do like Bam Margera. I thought your descriptions were decent. Though, I must agree with Ohh Star, because I was a little confused on that aspect. Other than that, there were a couple grammatical errors. But they can be easily fixed. I thought the first chapter was good and you should keep writing! :)

So, I just read the first chapter and I think this is quite an interesting idea! It's amazing how dreams can be so influential sometimes. One thing that doesn't make sense (and I apologize if this is jut how it happened in your dream) is that Elizabeth has to stay in Helsinki with Bam just because the room was booked while they were together? I just don't understand why she had to be there, unless she works for him or something? Otherwise, this was quite good and I hope the story goes well.