My Saving Grace - Comments

This is so not okay. I was really enjoying this story and then it just ends D: you have to start the sequel!!!

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I enjoyed reading this story. I think the detail is very good, especially in a story like this where you want the reader to fully understand visualize what is happening. I think this story is very easy to read and follow. I like that it's not overly complicated and serious too.

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I enjoyed reading this story. I think the detail is very good, especially in a story like this where you want the reader to fully understand visualize what is happening. I think this story is very easy to read and follow. I like that it's not overly complicated and serious too.

When I first started to read this story I was a little bit weary of an avengers story, but it is really good. The story started off slow, and Chapter two was a little hard to read but after that it was great! Your writing style is really good, unique. Its fun and very detailed. I think though, too much detail is where I get a little bored as a reader, and I think that is a subjective point of view coming from me.

I really did enjoy it though and can't wait to finish the story! :)

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Well,for the beginning, I am not all into the Avengers thing.But when I start reading a good story,then the whole thing changes and I up to read any kind of it.
I love your writing style,how you describe every little action with such clear vision.
I like how funny can this story be and serious at the same time.
Keep up the good work and amazing story,really good story. < 3

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I'm not into the Avengers or anything like this, but I did enjoy the first two chapters I read. I like how you wrote it with a very laid back feeling. It's not too uptight or anything like that, you know? I really enjoyed reading what I did. Amanda seems like a really cool character. Good job so far ^.^

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As far as the story and plot goes, it’s pretty good even though I’ve only read like two chapters. I don't really read superhero fan fiction, I tend to stay with music or original sometimes, but I enjoy this. I do have a problem with the layout though, it’ a little too bright for my liking. That was my only concern, like I said the story and plot is well written. I’m planning on finishing reading it.

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This is the second avengers story I’ve read and I’m enjoying it! I’m adding it to my recommended list to keep an eye on it. I agree that it was tough to read in the beginning but as the chapters went on it got easier to read, which was great. I love your writing style, and I’m ready for more!

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I'm only vaguely familar with the Avengers, so this was pretty hard for me to read in the beginning, but as the story went on you did a very nice job filling in the necessary information and I wasn't as lost anymore. You've got a really easy to read style of writing, and your grammar is perfect. You've got a really nice story here. Keep up the great work!

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I love how you are descriptive on the story plot but I just wish you'd be descriptive on how she looks like because I got no idea:( Also, is the lovely Thor in there? I haven't read all the way through yet but if he isn't you should totally bring him in!

Descriptive - check
Spelling and Grammar - check
Title - check (I thought that was great title for the story
Story flow-yness - check. (It was very flowly. there wasn't a big gap of what the hell happened. Easy to read. )

:D

Mmm I wasn't too happy to have an Avengers fan fic from comment swap, even though i love the avengers, but I really loved the story. I'm on chapter 9 and I really like it. keep up the good work!

Ohmigod... WHY.
WHAT HAPPENS TO HER? WHAT HAPPENS TO HAWKEYE? SO MANY UNANSWERED QUESTIONS. -sobs-

I've only read a couple chapters, but good job! I really like how everything is nice and clean format wise. I like how you ended chapters, it's like a cliffhanger and draws the reader in to continue and anticipate more. Dialogue is good to have, because it helps carry a story, but i think adding more detail will really improve you as a writer. But so far so good, I was interested and entertained through it all so good job!

I loved the end and I can't wait for the sequel. This was on hell of a story.

@ KWarhol
The surprise is that it's over. Ahaha.

What's the little surprise? I think I missed it?

I'm excited to see if she healed her brother and if she lives! Sequel ASSSEEMMBLLEEEE

Lol... THE END...
I love and hate that ending.
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NEW UPDATE!
There's a little surprise hidden in there. Please let me know what you think! Love you all!

I love, love this story. I can't get enough of it. I hope you update soon.

Its ok. We missed you :P
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