A Beautiful Mistake - Comments

dude. i'm so fucking mad at cassidy, but at the same time idk how to feel. like, what the hell?! and her liking harry just makes it worse because he's with cass and all.
gah, i want to pull out my hair because i'm so frustrated with her situation. where does she go? what does she do?!
ugh. see what you do to me?!?! =]

Love this!! You need to update soon!! ;) <3

okay, i gotta tell you i am SOOO glad Comment Swap brought me here! :D i love One Direction, and i adore this story! i really want to know what Zayn said to herrr!!! omfg you must update this soon!! imma subscribe now! :DD <33

comment swap brought me here and I'm not really happy about it :/ I hate 1D with a passion. Your story sounds interesting, though and the plot is creative and original. You have decent story and grammar and though I don't like the fandom, I would tell you to continue this because I think it has potential.

Comment swap brought me here and I'm glad it did. The plot is good as well as your grammar. It's very interesting and I hope you will reveal why her parents were shot. The layout is pretty good as well. :)

And if you're interested, I have a Harry Styles story as well and I hope you might read it sometime. :)

I love this, please update again soon!!

I LOVE ZAYN. I wish I knew what he whispered .-.

I'm honestly giddy with excitement right now. I really like where this story is heading!! Please update soon <3 I'm dying to know what's up.

Okay, this is only the second OD fiction i have read. I'm not sure if i'm a fan or not. I'm not sure i'm okay with how she started dating Harry because it just seems so absurd. Maybe in a few chapters that will be explained but right now it just seems unreal. As for everything else I can't say like but the beginning was very raw and made me drawn in. I found reading some points was hard but after reading chapter five i was concerned with why Harry invited her. Some things seem to just happen with no reasoning which often confuses me, maybe that is your writing style but really this is a good story and i'm interested in seeing how it continues.
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This has nothing to do with the story, but I really enjoy the layout. I think the picture and the colors of it and the background go really well together. Plus the writing for the title is pretty. Anyway, the story. I really enjoyed your writing style and this story is interesting. I found a few things unrealistic (ie, why would the boys want to meet Kai so bad?) but that's not a big deal. Other than that, I liked reading this and keep it up :)

Omg this just makes me smile so much and I really can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up, girl! Ahdkakshedhak :) xx

I love how you portray Harry. :3 You make him seem even more adorable.
I'm excited for the next chapter! After all, the rest of the boys will be in it, hopefully.
:D

Well. That was a little forward of Harry. Slightly flirtatious, even. Tsk tsk.
I still don't particularly like Cassidy, but maybe she'll lighten up. (:
I'm excited for the next chapter! Best of luck writing.
-Kate

Aw, I like this! Kai and Harry should get together instead :)

I'm not actually a One Direction fan, let's be honest here, but hey! This may change it. It's so nicely written, and actually made me smile throughout the chapters you've got here. Couple that with the nice layout and boom! You may have just made my day.

YES comment swap! Thank you for the 1D fic :)

This isn't bad. I'm not a fan of the Harry fics, but I do like that yours isn't a 'I've known Harry since we were in daipers' kind of thing. It's a good twist.

Good luck with the rest! :)

What the fuck is wrong with Cassidy? Like, seriously?

Woah. I now absolutely love you for writing an amazing fanfic. fjnweonfweorirqa;f'rwrefnrowenfoi THANK YOU SO MUCH! Update quick quick quick pretty please! x

Cassidy. Ooohhhh, Cassidy. I don't really like you. :P
BUT I enjoyed the update! Keep up the great work. :D
-Kate

Chapter Three is my favorite chapter :D I couldn't stop smiling the whole way through. Don't go telling me that I love Harry now, missy. I know you will. :P