July 22nd, 2012 at 02:32am
A Beautiful Mistake - Comments
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Love this!! You need to update soon!! ;) <3July 2nd, 2012 at 08:16am
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okay, i gotta tell you i am SOOO glad Comment Swap brought me here! :D i love One Direction, and i adore this story! i really want to know what Zayn said to herrr!!! omfg you must update this soon!! imma subscribe now! :DD <33June 30th, 2012 at 02:27am
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comment swap brought me here and I'm not really happy about it :/ I hate 1D with a passion. Your story sounds interesting, though and the plot is creative and original. You have decent story and grammar and though I don't like the fandom, I would tell you to continue this because I think it has potential.June 29th, 2012 at 04:30pm
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Comment swap brought me here and I'm glad it did. The plot is good as well as your grammar. It's very interesting and I hope you will reveal why her parents were shot. The layout is pretty good as well. :)
And if you're interested, I have a Harry Styles story as well and I hope you might read it sometime. :)June 29th, 2012 at 02:49pm -
I love this, please update again soon!!June 29th, 2012 at 10:36am
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I LOVE ZAYN. I wish I knew what he whispered .-.June 29th, 2012 at 05:45am
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I'm honestly giddy with excitement right now. I really like where this story is heading!! Please update soon <3 I'm dying to know what's up.June 28th, 2012 at 10:27am
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Okay, this is only the second OD fiction i have read. I'm not sure if i'm a fan or not. I'm not sure i'm okay with how she started dating Harry because it just seems so absurd. Maybe in a few chapters that will be explained but right now it just seems unreal. As for everything else I can't say like but the beginning was very raw and made me drawn in. I found reading some points was hard but after reading chapter five i was concerned with why Harry invited her. Some things seem to just happen with no reasoning which often confuses me, maybe that is your writing style but really this is a good story and i'm interested in seeing how it continues.
-sJune 19th, 2012 at 07:19pm -
This has nothing to do with the story, but I really enjoy the layout. I think the picture and the colors of it and the background go really well together. Plus the writing for the title is pretty. Anyway, the story. I really enjoyed your writing style and this story is interesting. I found a few things unrealistic (ie, why would the boys want to meet Kai so bad?) but that's not a big deal. Other than that, I liked reading this and keep it up :)June 17th, 2012 at 01:52am
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Omg this just makes me smile so much and I really can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up, girl! Ahdkakshedhak :) xxJune 16th, 2012 at 10:07pm
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I love how you portray Harry. :3 You make him seem even more adorable.
I'm excited for the next chapter! After all, the rest of the boys will be in it, hopefully.
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Well. That was a little forward of Harry. Slightly flirtatious, even. Tsk tsk.
I still don't particularly like Cassidy, but maybe she'll lighten up. (:
I'm excited for the next chapter! Best of luck writing.
-KateJune 11th, 2012 at 11:23am -
Aw, I like this! Kai and Harry should get together instead :)June 11th, 2012 at 11:20am
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I'm not actually a One Direction fan, let's be honest here, but hey! This may change it. It's so nicely written, and actually made me smile throughout the chapters you've got here. Couple that with the nice layout and boom! You may have just made my day.June 10th, 2012 at 02:28pm
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YES comment swap! Thank you for the 1D fic :)
This isn't bad. I'm not a fan of the Harry fics, but I do like that yours isn't a 'I've known Harry since we were in daipers' kind of thing. It's a good twist.
Good luck with the rest! :)June 8th, 2012 at 05:57am -
What the fuck is wrong with Cassidy? Like, seriously?June 8th, 2012 at 04:24am
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Woah. I now absolutely love you for writing an amazing fanfic. fjnweonfweorirqa;f'rwrefnrowenfoi THANK YOU SO MUCH! Update quick quick quick pretty please! xJune 8th, 2012 at 03:31am
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Cassidy. Ooohhhh, Cassidy. I don't really like you. :P
BUT I enjoyed the update! Keep up the great work. :D
-KateJune 8th, 2012 at 03:03am -
Chapter Three is my favorite chapter :D I couldn't stop smiling the whole way through. Don't go telling me that I love Harry now, missy. I know you will. :PJune 8th, 2012 at 02:57am
gah, i want to pull out my hair because i'm so frustrated with her situation. where does she go? what does she do?!
ugh. see what you do to me?!?! =]