Donuts - Comments

This is a very good story, i really enjoyed it. The story had a very good flow, but it needs to have a bit of description about the characters. I loved each and every part of it, about the best friend and all. Great title as well. Looking forward to reading more of your stories.

I really like your story.
You write very well.
I think it would be good if you could get a layout for your story. This is because layouts sometimes help understand the story better. You could add some images so that we get a better idea about the characters.
Wonderful work!

This is great. I like how well defined their friendship is and how close they are. I don't know I just think this is a great story that's kind of like a snapshot of two people's lives as they overlap. I don't know if that's what you were going for but I like that it feels that way. Great Job!

Lol, I really love the title. I found this story by comment swap and I'm glad I found it.

It's different from most stories I read on here because romance, it's not about romance. I like that you focused your topic on friendship.

Once little thing for me is about the main character. I don't know if you meant for it to be that way to be told, but I am a little confused on who the main character is. I'm sure it's a girl because of the name, but I think the main character should have more detail since she is the one telling the story.

But anyways, this is great :) Good luck w/ future stories :)