Kaleidoscope - Comments

I am now just getting back to reading this? Seriously, I'm terrible.
I want to know if he's dead or if he just left. I have a feeling he's dead and it makes me sad, especially now that you state they had a child. Her current point in life is so depressing and I truly feel for her.

Do you remember the first time we made love? That was an intense line to start the chapter with. But I liked it. xD It was short, sweet, romantic. I loved the ending of how he called her "his princess" and she called him "warrior". It was sweet. :) Wonderful update!

I like Umma Eun Jin. She's more help than I thought she'd be, very sly. ;) I liked her comment at the end about how she agreed that she was a good mother. Maybe things are getting better? Wonderfully written chapter; I felt just as nervous as those two. haha

So I just sat down and read what you have of this story in one sitting...

I really really really like this a whole lot! I know of EXO-K and M but I don't really follow them all too much. But still I found myself enjoying this story!

One of the things I liked is that you definitely didn't stick to the conventional girl-meets-guy sort of situation. As a reader, I got to "watch" Iseul grow up through major obstacles in her life.
The set up of the story also worked so well. I love how that in every chapter the last line kind of hits home to the theme of the chapter.

Also, the spelling and grammar are excellent. Bonus points there!!

With that being said, aww man, I wish she had so no to Joon Myeon....GAH! it nearly drives me mad!!
But at the same time I kinda appreciate the vulnerability of Iseul, (oddly enough...o_O) like in a way that it's realistic in a way a young teenager might be.

I did NOT like Ella right from the beginning...just no... and when that news got out I was more than certain that I hated her. But then I found myself angry at the boy also.
It's strange, but I find myself very protective of the main character. Like she isn't having the best life and she now has to deal with this...

no...just no.

I like Brea a whole lot already, and she's only been in the last chapter I've read.

I think I ranted a bit too much so Imma gonna leave it there. =D

Asdfhkl. I have no words for this story, really. It's so beautifully written, but I have no idea what to do with my emotions. The main girl is amazingly characterized, and I just support her so much. Omg, my feelsssssssssss. I don't even know.

I was really hoping she would have said no. I really did. And her last statement made me really wish she had. Poor girl; I hate to see her keep getting hurt. :(
And, ah!, the author notes. Thank you for writing such a wonderous story. ^.^

I just want to punch him in the face right now. -.- The douche bag!!! Just. Why? Gah.
And that stupid slut, I could punch her too.
But its good Tae Young was there.
Wonderful update.

Unless you updated a lot this last time, I was seriously behind. Dahell?

This is incredible and feel such remourse for her. I mean, her mother dies, she has to leave, and then her father hits her. Poor girl. :( Gah, my heart is breaking that he took Ella to prom and didn't pay attention her. BREAKING, I TELL YOU.

AND THEN HE'S DRUNK AND KISSES HER. WHAT?

Amazing. Can't wait for the next update! Sorry this came so late. :/

So sad. :( Her life isn't going very well at all. Poor girl.

Guh, so amazing! I felt so heartbroken for her that she had to leave. :(

So, to start with, the layout. I feel like this is very well put together, although I'm not normally a fan of gifs. I'm not sure whether it's fanfiction and the boy in the picture is the one in the story, but to be honest I just read this like an original fiction, so I suppose it doesn't really matter. I like the way the colours blend together, and the text is very readable. I give the layout an eight out of ten.

Onto the main substance of the story, my first thought is that this is highly emotive, and my second is that it's very authentic. I read all three chapters, and I have to say I love the way you've started with a character who is fat and a bully, but who becomes so much more than that. You manage to make your main character very sympathetic despite her weaknesses, and this comes across as a highly realistic piece of dramatic writing. I bought every bit of it, as much as if it was a genuine memoir. I think my favourite part is the prose surrounding the divorce- that really hit home for me. My second favourite part is the ending of the third chapter- very sweet and teary.

All in all, I think this is an excellent piece of writing, and, I can see from your number of reccs, a real overlooked gem. Keep up the good work!

This is adorable! I love your writing style and find Iseul and Joon Myun's friendship to be one of the cutest things ever. I look forward to reading more of this!

Let me admit my ignorance. I really have no idea who Kim Joon Myun is, but I'm a fan of Kpop and I love this! Your writing is just so lovely and descriptive. It flows so well!
Gah! This is awesome!

Omg. This is so lovely~. Thank you for writing this. c: <3