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  • Shortness2012

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    I'm sorry guys but I was really young when I wrote this, so I'm sure it's written really bad. but I really don't want to edit it.
    May 11th, 2013 at 10:46pm
  • aychemgee

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    It sounded interesting when I read the summary, but I barely got trough the first chapter and I don't want to read anymore because of the way it's written. I think you need to edit it a bit.
    May 11th, 2013 at 09:59am
  • Death_to_Roses

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    You would have so many more more readers if you edited your story. The plot sounded pretty interesting but the way it's written is a turn off. :(
    May 11th, 2013 at 06:56am
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    @ Infinity and Beyond;
    I'm not talented when it comes to writing. But you don't have to read it if you find it annoying. I just write it because it keeps my stress levels down.
    April 30th, 2013 at 04:26am
  • Infinity and Beyond;

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    Eggh,im not trying to be rude or anything, but why do you always put quotation marks where you don't need it? it's kind of bothering me, for example...

    "We all went to the waiting room and waited." Should be We all went to the waiting room and waiter."

    So how bad was it? Joe asked laughing. Should be "So how bad was it?"

    "On sale one to ten? I asked." Should be "On scale one to ten?" I asked.
    April 28th, 2013 at 05:49pm
  • Infinity and Beyond;

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    I went back and read, at the ball thingy... Mrs. Jonas said in 2 days and they went on the same day...
    April 28th, 2013 at 05:31pm
  • Shortness2012

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    @ Infinity and Beyond;
    What do you mean lol?
    January 18th, 2013 at 11:33pm
  • Infinity and Beyond;

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    Nick just like, ldehfsljlkhvfdhzjkx
    January 18th, 2013 at 11:31pm
  • Shortness2012

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    @ Infinity and Beyond;
    Wink
    January 6th, 2013 at 01:16am
  • Infinity and Beyond;

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    @ Shortness2012
    Great ;D
    January 5th, 2013 at 11:26pm
  • Shortness2012

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    @ Infinity and Beyond;
    We shall see lol. I have something planned don't worry.
    January 5th, 2013 at 11:12pm
  • Infinity and Beyond;

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    I wonder what Joe's going to do when he says I love you. Well, a normal day with Jessy drinking coffee and Joe says I love you is fine. But I love where the guy does something special and says I love you. xD
    January 5th, 2013 at 04:58am
  • Shortness2012

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    @ Infinity and Beyond;
    Lol me too xD
    December 31st, 2012 at 12:22am
  • Infinity and Beyond;

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    I wana stick my tongue out at Miley.
    December 30th, 2012 at 07:33am
  • Shortness2012

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    @ Infinity and Beyond;
    Lol I didn't think of that lol
    December 21st, 2012 at 11:48pm
  • Infinity and Beyond;

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    I would of scream and move around a lot, and make them have a hard time putting those girly stuff on me.
    December 20th, 2012 at 09:39pm
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    @ Infinity and Beyond;
    What lol?
    December 13th, 2012 at 07:37pm
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    I'm in a bad mood, so like. UGH, why didn't Nick like, I don't know. fdfbfdbx just. I DON'T KNOW.
    December 13th, 2012 at 04:59am
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    @ Infinity and Beyond;
    Lol yeah Mr. Green
    December 8th, 2012 at 04:51am
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    @ Shortness2012
    :P Okay
    December 8th, 2012 at 04:49am
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