A Little Bit Country, a Little Bit Rock and Roll - Comments

Hello there, I'm from comment swap and I am really honest. This is all constructive, so please, don't take offend.

So, the chapters are a little short and mostly dialogue and they lack flow. I think this story would be rad if it were a little more fluent.

So I have no idea who this Colten dude is. There was a totally awesome opportunity to introduce me and make me swoon over this mystery man, but I'm at loss. I know his name and his speech patterns at that is it.

Give your readers a real person. Someone with charisma or awkward charm or something. I wanna feel like I'm with John Doe. Not reading him. Having said that, I can see this going somewhere and I'll read up on the rest of this.

I love your story! Update it again soon, it's so good

Thanks! I was using my own experience with the, ah, subject. I can understand why men like oral, but I don't really get what the benefit for the average woman is. I figured Skylar might in feel the same way.

Oh. Oh my God. Oh my God, what is this?

This awesomeness?

We all know they belonged together, no matter how much I desired that boy for myself. XD I am hopeless. But hey, this is a cute story and a cute couple, and I really like it, and I laughed when Skylar didn't handle the "explosion in her mouth" as well as an experienced person. XD Keep it up!

Thanks! Gotta love fan fiction, eh?

I am glad I am not the only one who thought those two should be together.
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This is really cute so far.