September 14th, 2013 at 06:11am
Poor guy having to be put on drugs cause people think he is crazy. Although, he does seem crazy...no offense to him!
I think you have a good story so far and I will read and comment on the other chapters later. Forgive me for retiring early!
Keep on writing :)
I'm assuming their in a mental hospital, right? because if they are, then I have one little critique. I feel like the patients wouldn't be sleeping on a cot. They'd probably sleep on a twin bed (maybe one that has wrist and ankle straps attached to each end of the bed). Sleeping on a cot feels more like a jail than a hospital.
Other than that, I think the story's great so far. Keep it up! :)