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@ TheSilentObserver
Thank you for such a nice comment. I logged in randomly, and haven't used this since I was in high school. So, if my writing was decent back then, I hope it has only gotten better.

So, I too found this via comment swap, and although I'm not a Teen Wolf fan, I have to admit, I really appreciate your writing style, it's got a unique and interesting quality to it. Writing styles are very particular for me and they're an integral part of whether or not I'll like the story, the storyline can be amazing but if the writing style doesn't capture me, I'm not able to get into it at all. This story however was awesome, although I wasn't used to the characters or the usual plot lines, I really enjoyed reading it simply because of your writing style.

This was recommended to me via comment swap. I'm not a part of the Teen Wolf fandom, so I don't think I appreciated the story as much as someone who was a member of the fandom and knew the characters would. I checked when this was last updated and it was about two years ago, so I don't think this will ever be finished, but it would be nice to see it come to a good conclusion.

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I have never watched an episode of teen wolf in my life, however, I found myself wanting to read more of this story. I don't know if I can truly say that you jumped right into it in the first chapter, because I feel like maybe if I was familiar with teen wolf I might of understood it better.

On the other hand, your use of imagery is fantastic. I found myself picturing the scenery you describe in your chapters. Also, the feelings and thoughts of the characters are very well written. The emotions the characters are portraying pass off well to the reader.

Great writing. Keep it up! (:

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I've only read the first chapter, its really good but it kind of moves a little quickly. I have never really seen teen wolf so i was a little confused but then again i did only read the first chapter. But i do love how you have it laid out so far. I found it interesting when he called dibs on his stepsister. That and the "why do boys have to smell so awful" i found that funny :) You're writing is really good. Keep up the good work :)

Why had I not come across this story before? It's great! You should definitely continue writing it. You're a pretty good writer. A lot of Teen Wolf fan fictions are poorly written, but yours has good descriptions. And there's hardly ever any good Scott ones either!
I hope you come back to writing this story and don't end up abandoning it. It has a ton of potential, I'm telling you.

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I have only read the first chapter and like the comments say below it starts of kind of fast and to be quite honest I didn't know what was going on. I think you might want to talk about the backqround of the whole thing like what happened before they got there explain fully what is going on at first. The way it is set out is fine but needs that little more detail. I like how she says "why do boys have to smell so awful" it was funny. :) I don't understand why she wanted to go into her new stepbrothers room in the first place. However I do like the first chapter and want to read more to see how it all turns out for the camping trip.

Though your story starts of fast, I find myself understanding the relationship etc. as time go on. The actual quality of your writing is very good, and well written, with a plot that's interesting and original.
Keep up the good work

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You should have given a bit more introduction.. it confused me a bitt.

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I only read one chapter, so ignore this if this is taken care of later in the story, but as some people below me said, you did just jump right into it. I had no idea what was going on. An bit of an introduction to the characters and their situation is much needed. Especially for those of use who are unfamiliar with Teen Wolf. Other than that, your writing style is fantastic and gives the reader a clear image of what's going on. Keep up the great work, this story really has major potential (:

Brought to you by comment swap. I don't watch teen wolf, and I never knew what this was a fan fiction about until I read NotJasmineTee's comment. She's right. You jump into the story face first and I'm clueless. But if I did watch teen wolf I think I'd say that this is a good story. Your writing style is good, and you get the point across.

Dun dun dun! They kissed.
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I love teen wolf, but for those people that aren't fans and just jump into this story, it may not make any sense because the characters aren't developed at all and no relationships are established in the beginning. I think it'd be wise to slow this story down (you're really jumping into the action way too quickly and it's really quite confusing) and just work on getting the basics down of the story line before throwing in plot twists. In this story, you have a few major problems with keeping the tense the same way. You'll be writing in past tense (ex. "She grabbed the mirror") and then you'll switch to present tense in the middle of the sentence (ex. "She grabs the mirror"). It's just a lot to try to process in reading. Other than that, I think what you're going for is really great, just not being executed properly. I really enjoy this story and you seem very creative in writing it, it just needs some work. I hope you don't take any of this the wrong way, I'm just trying to help how you go about writing- another opinion is always good.

Ahhhhh!!! More please (:

Lol Scott's worst nightmare.

Oh... Hello there... ;)

Hollly wolf, comment swap brought me here and I've got to say, I'm really glad. This is the first Teen Wolf fic I've read, and so far so good. I'm currently on the second chapter, but I thought I'd leave you a nice little comment. This story is definitely eye-catching, and I can't wait to read the rest. Good job, keep it up.

-Jess xx

Wait what?
Didn't she just reject him? Lol! So confused.
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Straight off; I really like this, it's actually the first and only Teen Wold fic I like....well that and I am not a huge mega fan of teen wolf; but this is really interesting. I am (and still going to) be reading it because it feels like an original fic..so yeah I like this.. a lot

First you comment on my story and now I get your story in comment swap! :) Okay, so I don't watch Teen Wolf so this is a bit confusing to me and it also seems kind of rushed. But the writing is good and I like the layout. I like this story too. :)