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wow, really good, i read it due to the comment swap but really good job on this. I loved to emotion, the writting of it was amazing . Good job really :)

I love The Maine, I love Kennedy and I loved this! He didn’t need Olivia anyways. This is so well written it made me feel like i was there instead of reading it on my computer. The ending “Little did I know that quite some time later would this girl be my wife, my love for all eternity, and my saving grace.” Made me awwww out loud. Very well done!

Comment swap. I actually liked how shortly it was finished. Is that what a one shot is? Anyways, I found it very easy to read and I enjoyed reading it. Part of me slipped into the story, I felt like I was there watching it unfold. And that is what I really look for in a story, you managed to interest me and honestly that’s hard to do. Good work, I love it.

I love how you wrote this story! When i read it, I felt like i was there, like I could see and feel everything that was happening. And I absolutely love the very last sentence, I love how theres a little bit of mystery in it, but you still know whats going to happen. I always look for stories like this, but theyre rare. So great job! It's so well written and the reader, at least I, got so connected to it i couldnt stop reading! Keep it up!

So, comment swap. No idea who Kennedy Brock is, but I love him :) I was worried at first that I wouldn't understand the fanfic because I didn't even know what the fan part was about, but your one-shot is so wonderful I can't even handle it. It felt so real, like I could see everything that was happening. Your details are perfect, and I didn't notice any grammar/spelling issues. It's beautifully written with a sweet ending that made me super happy :) Good job all around!

I loved this one-shot, it was really good. I love the detail and emotion put into it.

Comment swap!
This was absolutely beautiful! It had much detail and emotion. I loved it. The layout of the story really helped set the mood. I don't know who Kennedy Brock is but I don't care. This was awesome!

I really adored this story. A well described and punctual beginning, a thrilling and very revealing middle, and a fantastically light-hearted end, call for a wonderful piece of work. You honestly should be very proud of yourself, I've found good things to read on the internet very hard to find. I believe you earned yourself a follower :)