I read the actual third chapter up to your latest update and it's been an interesting progression. Since the shift in attention has gone from Jack to Alex, I'm really interested in finding out where you're going with this story.
I just started reading this story and it's definitely different from anything I've ever read. It's sweet how the guys have taken a genuine interest in Ember and that they're all hanging out together. I'm subscribed and eager to read more about this.
On another note, I noticed that the third chapter is a repost of the first one.