The Path of the Fallen - Comments

Oh my god i left for a week and missed the epic ending!!! NOOO! I am so sorry for not commenting! I love it though, its clever and I was surprised by Edies's reaction!

Dude.......I haven't cried for years ;_; What have you done to me? hahaha just kidding! I Can't wait for the sequel. >.< I wish they had made this into a real movie @_@

I check everyday for the sequel! This story is simply breathtaking. Love it!

She shouldn't be mad though, she did say she wanted to be with him and this was the only way.

I JUST SLAMMED MY HEAD ON THE DESK

agh!!!!!!! this is soooooooooo not going to be good. Edie is going to hate him for what he's done, but she has to get it through her head that it was the only way that he could save them both!

Dang, I thought for sure that she died. Will she hate him now that he made her immortale? :/

I'm so excited to see where you go from here. :D

This is freaking amazing!!! And I really thought she died and it felt like I was going to cry but then she resurrected from her short-span death :) ahhhh can't wait for the sequel.. I wasn't really expecting one but AWESOME :D

So good! Don't let her be mad at him! Lol sequel now! Xx

I liked how you decided to do this and how we got to see Loki's reaction to it all - even if it was sort predicted. I hope Edie won't kill or hate Loki for long. He didn't ask her what she wanted. He just did. I hope it will be something they both can live with. Hmm... On a happier note: sequel time!! Can't wait to see what happens next. :D

I wouldn't imagine her being to happy about coming immortal, but of course grateful for coming back....

So many questions....

This chapter kind of made me cry just a tiny bit. I love that you made her die before becoming immortal, that way we could see what Loki would be like and how he'd feel, even though we already had an idea, of course. -absolutely loved this. They're so perfect for each other it hurts, hahaha.
And now onto new things: the sequel! WOOOOP, PARTYY! I can't wait for what's coming next. I love everything about this story it's so beautiful, so perfect!
- Sara.

Oh dear I can't stop crying! I'm so excited for the sequel omgggg.

It can't be the last chapter ;_; It caaaaaaaan't.

Oh God, my feels. My feels. They can't even take it. Can't even. Too much feels for one night. First with Winter Soldier, and all the Natasha/Bucky feels. Now this, I can't even. I have lost the ability to even. I cannot even. My feels hurt, I need some chocolate.
Okay, sequel. With babies and marriages and all sorts of lovely things. I need to bring my feels back. Oh, God, they are everywhere. And now I'm just rambling about how my feels hurt, but I can't help it, you got me right in the feels. Like bam, blast of science-y-magic from Loki's scepter, right in the feels.
Okay, I'm sorry, I'm going to go somewhere else now.

Soooo this chapter made me sob like a bitch lmao
So emotionally draining lol i absolutely can NOT wait for the sequel !
P.s I DONT appreciate you playing with my emotions when Edie was thought to be dead and Loki was having a heart attack and that's when the tears came ... Not cool lol

I cried. I love Edie so much, when she "died" I was in tears. Then when she started living again, oh my gosh the waterfalls were flooding. Hahah, thank you for writing this series! Can't wait for the sequel! xD

oh god it just hit me...that was the last chapter...
shhhhhhite...okay...sequal...I'm going to die until you get that up...

Ahh! All of my emotions are running wild right now. Haha! I can't wait for the next installment of this series. I am very intrigued with this story and I am going to read it until the end. I can't wait for the next installment!