Right Now. - Comments

  • I really liked this story - I'm also entering the contest you wrote this for, so I read this and thought it was really good. I love that Liam and Dylan didn't just end up together in the end actually, that Liam was still kept as a best friend although it was obvious Dylan wanted more. Also you captured well all the worries flying around in Dylan's head, and this made it very sad, especially coupled with the shocking beginning.
    July 5th, 2012 at 11:08pm