Take Me Away - Comments

This is a great story. Please keep it up (:
Update more!

Is that a reference to AVPM I see? "He would say that it would make him look like an idiot" ???

Sounds fair enough to me. If I remember to, I'll check it out later ^^ good chapter.

Great chapter. I honestly loved it. Update soon, yeah?

I love this story! It's one of the few mibba stories that get me into the book, even though Meridith and I don't have a similar background story. I'm not really a spelling/grammer natzi, I kind of just automatically skip through errors when I'm reading, so I'm not a huge help with that. I really do like the story line and feel that you make your characters act like they would in real life. I also like how Meridith is afraid of turning into a form of Bellatrix, but also still realistically loves her as a mother. Subscribed and recomended! Update soon please!

P.S-- you make George act so adorable <3

Ahh, I'm a sucker for George stories. I like your plot so far and the idea of her being Bella's daughter. I also liked how you made their relationship. Can't wait for more!

I like it a lot, it's a lot easier to read now and besides the minor spelling errors or lack of the ending letter. The chapter is really good and building up to something and I can't wait to see what it will be. More soon please ::smile2.

Okay, so I'm new to the story aka not send here by commentswap xD anyways, I really like this so far. It's different from other stories I've read, it's one of the better written ones as well. I like the detailing, the characters and how they interact with one another. The layout is readable (thank you!) even on my iPhone which is what I'm reading/writing from right now. Anyways, that's besides the point. It would be a great help, if there was some spaces every now and then. It would make it even easier to read. Other than that I'm subscribing to this in hopes that this will continue being good and for more of it soon. :3

Comment swap brought me here as well and unfortunately I am not a huge Harry Potter fan, but I did read through the first chapter and I really love your way of writing. You write really detailed, making it really interesting and easy to follow the plot. Though, I have so say, maybe you could put a few spacing between your text? It would make it easier to read!

Okie dokie, I was sent here by comment swap, so here comes a longish review!
I like the concept of the story, I really do. Your voice is strong and distinctive.
There are quite a few grammatical and spelling errors, especially with the word "definitely." You've used "defiantly" in the place of it every time. The words mean two totally different things. Lately, I've noticed that it's a very common mistake. I just figured I'd point it out now.
Meredith is a bit of a Mary-Sue, in my opinion. She's super nice, easily offended, apparently easily liked, has to deal with being judged for her parentage or some other problem, whatever. Of course, it's something that can easily be fixed by just adding a few flaws.
Anyway, I still enjoyed it, so good job!

Great story so far! Keep posting!