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clevatino (100)

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where do i find that?

December 28th, 2012 at 05:52am

RCL. (100)

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@ clevatino
This isn't the actual story the actual story is tytm

December 28th, 2012 at 05:49am

clevatino (100)

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MWUAHAHAHA I AM IN!

December 28th, 2012 at 05:34am

RCL. (100)

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@ lauraborealice
i knew it once i saw your username kill me now

October 2nd, 2012 at 08:24am

lauraborealice (100)

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found it!

October 2nd, 2012 at 08:10am

RCL. (100)

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@ unbroken13
thanks so much

October 2nd, 2012 at 03:15am

unbroken13 (100)

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That was cute. I cannot wait for the next update!!!
xx

October 2nd, 2012 at 03:13am

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Now I'm no fan of One Direction I tend not to hate on certian fanfictions because of who they are about. From what I could see I found some sentences that didn't have capital letters at the beginng but I didn't find anything too disasterous as I have dislexia so it s minor set back for me =/. I noticed your dialouge sentences tended to be in one parargraph, I was taught to seperate them but and that's a personal rule I have with writing. I don't think you need to change anything for me, the layout however effed with my eyes a little and kind of put me off reading. Other than that I think its great.

September 19th, 2012 at 09:34am