Comment Swap Now I'm no fan of One Direction I tend not to hate on certian fanfictions because of who they are about. From what I could see I found some sentences that didn't have capital letters at the beginng but I didn't find anything too disasterous as I have dislexia so it s minor set back for me =/. I noticed your dialouge sentences tended to be in one parargraph, I was taught to seperate them but and that's a personal rule I have with writing. I don't think you need to change anything for me, the layout however effed with my eyes a little and kind of put me off reading. Other than that I think its great.