Playing House Forever - Comments

Normally I don't like lovey-dovey but this was too adorable not to like. The end was precious and makes me wish I played house with boys when I was younger...I was too busy kicking them at recess to take advantage of romance, I guess. I do want to point out the dialogue error (I'm not going to judge your entry, I just want to tell you so you can fix it to avoid being reported) with your speaking tags. An example:

“I can’t believe this is mine.” She said, looking around.

It should be:

"I can't believe this is mine," she said, looking around.

Again, not judging your entry on this!! My favorite part of this one shot was definitely the flashback and the day with the baby. "She just had to poop" made me laugh out loud. Great job on this and thank you for joining my contest! xo

This got a great big 'awwww.....' from me when I got to the end. Sly you Sid! That was my favorite part I think. Good luck in the contest!

wait, why did i say update soon? this is a one shot...ignore the last part of my last comment...sorry! great job with this story tho!!!

wait, why did i say update soon? this is a one shot...ignore the last part of my last comment...sorry! great job with this story tho!!!

that was sooo sweet!!! UPDATE SOON!!!

Awww :) That was so adorable. Well done !