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  • skinny love.

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    So, like I said, I'm not a fan of Harry or the fanfics about him, but you really have good potential with writing this, and I think this is going good. I do like it (:
    June 12th, 2012 at 06:09am
  • Calum Hood ;

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    I LOVE IT!!
    its really gooood!
    I can't wait for the next chapter! <333
    June 12th, 2012 at 05:41am
  • PsychVampGrimm

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    Harry was so rude, what a jerk!
    June 12th, 2012 at 05:41am
  • luke ham ham.

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    I really like this!
    Update soon!
    Can't wait for more! :D
    June 12th, 2012 at 05:30am
  • dinosaur2016

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    good first chapter Mr. Green cant wait for next one!! p.s. im so glad you told me to read this!;)
    June 12th, 2012 at 05:17am
  • LaBellaVita

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    Oh yeah, this is going to be a fun one! I'll be waiting for your next update.
    June 12th, 2012 at 05:15am
  • writing_wrongs

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    You switch between first and second person randomly and there are some spelling and grammar errors that make the story hard to follow. If you fix those it would be a great story.
    June 12th, 2012 at 05:11am
  • iron and wine.

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    This is amazing! I love it already :)
    June 12th, 2012 at 05:11am
  • Little Robyn;

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    Wow Harry's a jerk! Oh my goodness. I can't wait to see where you go with this :) Update soon, yeah? Great job!
    June 12th, 2012 at 04:40am
  • wishful;

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    Im gonna read this!!
    June 11th, 2012 at 12:38pm
  • June Blossom 143

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    cant wait! <3
    June 10th, 2012 at 11:56am
  • Little Robyn;

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    Not sure what the first chapter is about, but the layout is super cute! not typical? I wonder what's not typical about it.
    June 9th, 2012 at 04:15am
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