It is quite confusing, but I think that's why I love it so much. Confusion means it's not the average story and I adore how much Harry opposes the idea of fancying her :D Great job!
hehehehe that line cracked me up! I'm sorry it took so long to look at this story, but I'm glad I did! Your writing is amazing, my goodness! I'm jealous! Haha Keep writing more of this I like it!
BAHAHAHAHA. So sorry i've been gone for some time. only logged on today and saw you updated a new story so I decided to check it out. I'm only on the first chapter, but I love it. Louis' joke cracked me up. [; "How old is she, Hazza?" Perfect!