Welcome, Summer - Comments

This is rather quite interesting. Even if Ronnie Radke makes me want to vomit. But I'm glad it wasn't a typical fan girl story as those are all droll and bland. The detail is exquisite and it all flows together. There shal be more, right?

I really enjoy this story so far (: it's interesting and refreshing!

I really like where you're going with this (: I'm excited to see how it turns out!

I like the plot you have used so far far, I also like the title. I think that the way you included your characters thoughts was a good idea and I might steal it for future stories of my own because I'm that rude, keep writing because your really good!

I really like the way this has been started. The prologue is really intriguing and cryptic but the first chapter then starts to set a true story atmosphere and makes it feel like everything is going to be explained. I'm always worried with comment swap that I'll get something really crappy like 1D so when I saw this was Ronnie Radke I got very excited! I really hope you continue this as it seems like a very interesting relationship and I like the idea that the guy is the 'weak one' in a way and needs her to help him.

With the Hawaiian words, I think it would be a good idea to define them in the authors note so that those of us who don't know what they mean can find out easily and quickly.

Can't wait for more!
Jen xx

Oooohhh~

An update! I like this chapter, you know. I can already imagine Ailana being so gorgeous.

This is a lovely one-shot about Ronnie, very well-written. I do wish it wasn't a one shot though because it's very interesting, and makes you wonder how Ronnie and Ailana met. Maybe someday you'll write the full story? Hopefully. I love the ending: But, and Ronnie knew, 'Ailana was also soon becoming the only way he could stop thinking about using again. She challenged his mind, and was stubborn as hell but even without her knowing, she was fixing him.

And Ronnie was pretty sure that he was beginning to like that.
That was just perfect and ended it on a good note.

Good job!
:)

Noo! Stay away from the drugs!! I've never read a fic about Ronnie before, but my friends in highschool were obsessed with him! So this brought back a lot memories of those days :) I also have to say that your layout is really beautiful, I love the glow effect and the curved box thingy :) As for your writing, it flows very well, and as I said before, I've never read a Ronnie fic, but this was enjoyable to read so good job! :D

Hmm, I'm intrigued. I've never read a Ronnie Radke story, so I'm interested to see where you go with this. I really hope you update soon, because I'm definitely subscribing to this haha c:

Edit: I'm sorry, I forgot this was supposed to be a one shot, damn it.

I know this is supposed to be a oneshot, but I would love to see more. Your description of Ronnie's addiction was chilling and the relationship seemed so simple yet incredibly complicated. I was left wanting so much more...but that's a sign of great writing.

Hmm, I'm intrigued. I've never read a Ronnie Radke story, so I'm interested to see where you go with this. I really hope you update soon, because I'm definitely subscribing to this haha c: