Bits and Pieces - Comments

So far, so good. :) Keep writing, I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

These stories aren't bad. I like your idea of putting up a lot of snippets of stories. It's pretty cool. :)

Thnx!!

I enjoy your idea of putting a few stories in one. Yes there is some grammar problems but those can be easily fixed. Watch out when you type as the letters have become jumbled in the word, but other that I enjoyed reading it so far and can't wait for you to update again :)

First off, hit "Enter" twice after each completed paragraph so you've got a line of space. It's really difficult to read when everything is so compact. There are some minor grammar errors, such as forgetting commas and whatnot. Things like "he was also sent to assassin them" seem to be really muddled. What I do with this bit would be do think about what you want to write first. It's hard, while reading, to be clear of what's going on.

First off, hit "Enter" twice after each completed paragraph so you've got a line of space. It's really difficult to read when everything is so compact. There are some minor grammar errors, such as forgetting commas and whatnot. Things like "he was also sent to assassin them" seem to be really muddled. What I do with this bit would be do think about what you want to write first. It's hard, while reading, to be clear of what's going on.