August 17th, 2016 at 12:30am
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It's a sad story. The topic of suicide hits close to home for me. :( A bottle of advil doesn't really kill you though and not in 15 mins. Aside from that the story is good. Good dialogue. :3 Nice job writting it. Would have liked to see a bit more written, to see the story be a bit more developed to have a bit more of a background.
I adore your style of writing, and even though this is an incredibly sad story, i loved it. Well done.