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  • silent bones ;

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    Aw, I love Colin so much! ^-^ He's like this whole beautiful, caring little thing. Matthew's a bitch -yes, bitch- but I love him anyway x'D I just think he's really funny 8D And Elmer kind of reminds me of a kitten. It's incredibly enticing. :')
    I'm so happy you updated!! I love this, really, really, really. I think writing their first conversation from Colin's pov was really important, at least to me. I think I understand more the feelings underneath since he's sharing non-seen experiences. Everything is remarkably touchable and he's basing his conclusions by the small things, not only physical aspects like non-blind people do. It gets to the readers in a different way, things are more clear, specific and true. It's amazing :')
    I'm waiting for the next chapter. Don't go toast under the sun and forget this, miss!
    July 3rd, 2012 at 03:10pm
  • garrett hedlund;

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    Lol, I get what you did, from,the eyes of Colin and he's blind, good one(: Good chapter!!!
    July 3rd, 2012 at 10:44am
  • early_graves

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    I love this. I REALLY LOVE THIS. It's amazing. You're truly a great writer. Your character development is amazing as well. <3 more soon?
    July 3rd, 2012 at 07:17am
  • stallion duck.

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    Easily one of my favorite stories and its not even done. Lol.
    Oh you have a little glitch with your italics. It keeps going to the end of the chapter, not after he finishes signing.
    :)
    June 17th, 2012 at 06:06am
  • silent bones ;

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    Psss, you know you love me :D Just kidding.
    I LOVE THIS SO MUUUUUCH! :D
    This is so beautiful, so so so so beautiful. And they finally met! BOOYAH! *vomits rainbows from profound happiness*
    They’re all so freaking adorable and it makes my heart ache seeing how much they’re all suffering in their own personal way while suffering together for Andy. It’s completely heartbreaking and it makes me love them all the more.
    I can’t wait for the next chapter *-* I’m dying to read their first conversation!! Gah!
    This is so adbfgasgdkajhjgvdrhab!
    MOAR! :$
    <3
    June 16th, 2012 at 03:31pm
  • garrett hedlund;

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    YAHHHH!
    Their getting to know each other!!!!
    That's a good thing, I hope!
    I wonder what'll happen, now that their communicating with each other.!?
    Update soon! <3
    xoxo
    June 16th, 2012 at 10:49am
  • silent bones ;

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    «Were your words of love hollow like everyone else's? Please tell me they weren't, because if they were empty words with no meaning, then your words mean less than my own.» This is just... wow.

    Do you even realize how amazing your writing is? :o I'm- GAH! I don't even know what to say. With each passing story you prove yourself more and more. I already knew your writing was absolutely crazy -in a wonderful way- and that your story ideas were all extremely unique (p.s: just had a déjà vu while writing this O.O) but this just passes the limit of good, awesome, amazing… whatever. Three chapters in and this already passes the limit of perfect. You know what? You just managed to leave me speechless. My internal English dictionary isn’t broad enough to describe you as a writer. When you publish your books, I’m gonna tell everyone that I talked with you once *proud look*. Now, seriously… I will. You can’t just pass this world and not leave your mark. You HAVE got to publish your writing. The world needs to know you, not only the mibbian world.

    WOW.
    June 14th, 2012 at 08:27pm
  • Mew Aqua

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    this has really grabbed my interest.
    i can hardly wait to see what happens!
    Very Happy
    June 14th, 2012 at 12:41am
  • KidsFromYesterday182

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    my favorite chapter so far :] it was really supper duper good
    June 13th, 2012 at 12:24pm
  • xXHaleyHeartbreakXx

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    I wonder who killed andy. I can't wait to read more!!!
    June 13th, 2012 at 09:42am
  • Mew Aqua

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    I love this story!
    Update some more!?
    Please!
    June 13th, 2012 at 05:34am
  • LiveLifeDrunk

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    All of your stories are great. They make me happy. Update?
    June 13th, 2012 at 03:25am
  • stallion duck.

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    Where in the fuck do you get these ideas from? You evil genius. XD
    June 13th, 2012 at 12:54am
  • Ace Lightning.

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    omg so good!!!!!!!
    June 12th, 2012 at 10:49am
  • garrett hedlund;

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    I haven't even read the story yet and I already love it!
    I just read the character description and was hooked!
    June 12th, 2012 at 10:39am
  • KidsFromYesterday182

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    if there was a "like" button on here like facebook i would totally press it
    June 11th, 2012 at 03:34am
  • KidsFromYesterday182

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    super duper interesting :] update soon!!!
    June 10th, 2012 at 11:05pm
  • witch.

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    I absolutely love this.
    The concept is so original and awesome and- yes. Just yes.
    I'd love it if you updated soon. So you know, they won't be asking who killed Des.
    June 10th, 2012 at 11:28am