Kidnapped - Comments

I hope you continue this story, it is a really well written one! I ca't wait to read more whenever you post it up!

v -Agree. I love the summary and how much it draws the reader in. You're writing style is very intriguing as well.

I love how the first chapter touches on his past (before being kidnapped) and what his relationship with Liza was/what she meant to him. Sort of a sombre prologue - but that is to be expected of a story about kidnapping.

Good luck with this, I'm sure it'll become a hit. :)

It has such a solid prologue, it really fills you in a lot and I love that. It makes you interested, and it seems like a really good start. keep it up, I'm sure it will get more readers with more chapters:)

i love it!! idk why no one pays attention but dude this is really interesting!