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  • mistery gurl

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    im loving your story so far, update again soon! im hooked :)
    *suscribes*
    June 27th, 2012 at 12:47am
  • Nialls Freckles

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    eep! as./kdfjaskl/;df updaaattteee I wanna know moooree!
    June 27th, 2012 at 12:43am
  • Bluecaty15

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    i absolutely love this!! poor niall, he should get his friend back then maybe they become something more...*wink wink* Just kidding, but you should seriously update again soon!!
    June 27th, 2012 at 12:29am
  • SilentScreaming

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    oh em gee. i soo cant wait for your next update! please make it soon!
    June 26th, 2012 at 10:23pm
  • Red The Small

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    Nice update! :)
    June 26th, 2012 at 10:00pm
  • JustThinking

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    Still in need of a quick spel check and so. But still good too.
    June 26th, 2012 at 09:58pm
  • Head-Ache

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    The story is off to a good start. I really like it. I do see a couple mistakes, that with a quick read over you can fix and they are nothing big, either. In the third chapter you forgot to put that it was Louis's POV, so I got confused for a minute there.. Also in the first chapter I was just thinking that you might want to put the past first and then when she's on the plane after and separate it with 6 years later, or something like that, but that's just a suggestion. If you like it the way it is, then that's all good, because the chapter is still good. Another thing in the third chapter when Nina is describing her child hood with Niall, the sentences you wrote sound like lyrics from a Taylor Swift song, they may not be it just sounded familiar. All in all it's a good story, and I would love to read more!!
    June 16th, 2012 at 05:18am
  • Red The Small

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    You. Should. Update. I mean it <3 Hehe. I love it :)
    June 15th, 2012 at 01:02am
  • ElyRae

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    I love this! Please update soon! :D
    June 14th, 2012 at 07:02pm
  • Minnesota518

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    I SERIOUSLY LOVE THIS STORY. You've got me hooked, for sure. Can't wait to read what happens next! :))
    June 14th, 2012 at 04:06am
  • Nialls Freckles

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    I really like this plot, I can't wait to see where it's going!!
    June 14th, 2012 at 02:59am
  • KriziaAllstar

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    omg this is great just keep writing i think this might be one of my favorite fanfictions! <3
    June 14th, 2012 at 01:27am
  • loloutloud

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    love it!
    June 14th, 2012 at 12:04am
  • loloutloud

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    love it!
    June 14th, 2012 at 12:04am
  • wolfsaver

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    I love the plot! I can't wait for more!
    June 13th, 2012 at 11:58pm
  • JustThinking

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    I think it has potential. Personally I would like to have it more out written, as in more desciption and a more flowing writing. The plotline, events and characters are all really good so far and they interact really well together. I guess I'm thinking that a background build up in the beginning may be better for this sort of story. IDK, just an idea to think about.

    I really like this story so far no matter what. So if you think it's total bs, then just hit the ignore boutton on the other stuff and stick with that. More soon please Smile
    June 13th, 2012 at 11:09pm
  • Minnesota518

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    This is really cute! I like the concept and can't wait to read more!
    June 11th, 2012 at 11:11pm
  • loloutloud

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    neighbors!? and yay louis noticed!
    June 11th, 2012 at 01:00am
  • Red The Small

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    I really like where this is going! :) Can't wait for the update :)
    June 10th, 2012 at 09:31pm
  • LittleAprilShowers

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    I love hearing your positive comments!:)
    I'll update tomorrow!:)
    -April(:
    June 10th, 2012 at 09:21pm
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