My Half of the Necklace - Comments

im loving your story so far, update again soon! im hooked :)
*suscribes*

eep! as./kdfjaskl/;df updaaattteee I wanna know moooree!

i absolutely love this!! poor niall, he should get his friend back then maybe they become something more...*wink wink* Just kidding, but you should seriously update again soon!!

oh em gee. i soo cant wait for your next update! please make it soon!

Nice update! :)

Still in need of a quick spel check and so. But still good too.

The story is off to a good start. I really like it. I do see a couple mistakes, that with a quick read over you can fix and they are nothing big, either. In the third chapter you forgot to put that it was Louis's POV, so I got confused for a minute there.. Also in the first chapter I was just thinking that you might want to put the past first and then when she's on the plane after and separate it with 6 years later, or something like that, but that's just a suggestion. If you like it the way it is, then that's all good, because the chapter is still good. Another thing in the third chapter when Nina is describing her child hood with Niall, the sentences you wrote sound like lyrics from a Taylor Swift song, they may not be it just sounded familiar. All in all it's a good story, and I would love to read more!!

You. Should. Update. I mean it <3 Hehe. I love it :)

I love this! Please update soon! :D

I SERIOUSLY LOVE THIS STORY. You've got me hooked, for sure. Can't wait to read what happens next! :))

I really like this plot, I can't wait to see where it's going!!

omg this is great just keep writing i think this might be one of my favorite fanfictions! <3

love it!

love it!

I love the plot! I can't wait for more!

I think it has potential. Personally I would like to have it more out written, as in more desciption and a more flowing writing. The plotline, events and characters are all really good so far and they interact really well together. I guess I'm thinking that a background build up in the beginning may be better for this sort of story. IDK, just an idea to think about.

I really like this story so far no matter what. So if you think it's total bs, then just hit the ignore boutton on the other stuff and stick with that. More soon please

This is really cute! I like the concept and can't wait to read more!

neighbors!? and yay louis noticed!

I really like where this is going! :) Can't wait for the update :)

I love hearing your positive comments!:)
I'll update tomorrow!:)
-April(: