I Won't See You Tonight - Comments

  • MoMo_92

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    Lovely ending, they have a baby boy and it's been a year since they been together and they been through a lot to get to where they r now a happy family, love this story can't wait to read ur new one :)
    July 7th, 2012 at 09:36pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Fuck yea she gets to stay!!!!!! In ur mothsrfucking face Brian's dad!!!!!!! Tht was awesome I was sad tht she had to leave but luckily she told Jimmy and everyone was searching a way and they found it now she gets to stay without being killed and Brian doesn't get a new wife, cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    July 6th, 2012 at 05:46am
  • gothique4

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    yay she's immortal now and she can stay. Stick that up your ass Brian's Dad :p

    I get the feeling that the asshole is still going to try and come between themt hough
    July 6th, 2012 at 05:09am
  • MoMo_92

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    Yay Brian killed his brother and now Sam is safe and can be with her family now, and I'm glad tht u r continuing to write sooo congrats on tht, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    P.s can u message or leave a comment on my profile when u write the new story please :)
    July 2nd, 2012 at 09:14pm
  • VeeX6661

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    You cannot end this right here! OMG, pleaseee no. I wanna see prince charming (obviously Brian) come in, kick his brother's ass and save the day, then have a son so they can alll be free! GOSH, no :/
    Great job, this chapter was really good. Don't be hard on yourself. And I'm going to agree with MoMo, I think you should continue this, then start a completely different story with a new plot. (:
    July 1st, 2012 at 06:11am
  • MoMo_92

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    Oh nooooo Sam omg, this can't end to soon please I'm beggin u don't end it too soon we need to kno what's goin to happen with Sam and Brian's brother, omg poor Brian I kno tht his heart is hurting right now :( can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    July 1st, 2012 at 01:36am
  • MoMo_92

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    Love this chapter I had a felling tht the brother was causing the damage, I think you should finish the rest of this story and thn write a new Brian story with a different plot line becuz u got talent to write and u shouldn't quit writing after one story u continue makin more stories so tht everyone else can see how talented u r, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    June 28th, 2012 at 07:37pm
  • VeeX6661

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    Oh shitttt! Psycho brother on the loose chapter was really good and worth the wait, I must say.

    I must say, as much as I love this story, I'm all for another Brian story, but I'll take what you give us!

    I'm glad you aren't letting your talent go to waste!<3
    June 28th, 2012 at 07:12pm
  • gothique4

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    i love this chapter but damn the end was so dramatic and what a cliffhanger :-( I can't wait to find out what happens next.

    I think a sequel would be an awesome idea :-)
    June 28th, 2012 at 12:13pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Brian's dad is a complete asshole who needs to get his ass kick in literally like to the point tht when he sits down he floats in the chair, how fucking dare u call Sam a prostitute becuz she is anything but tht degrading, u r a disgrace I don't kno how u can say tht u r a father and a man becuz any man could see tht Brian loves Sam tht he is willing to give up his power just to be with her, I agree with VeeX661 he needs to get windmill in the throat ooo and thn he can choke to death on air and his adams apple :) Brian needs to find a way to keep Sam with him forever like seriously she has suffered and I think tht she is able to give Brian a son sooo u need to chill it out, I hope all the other gods let Brian turn Sam into a god.....can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    June 26th, 2012 at 08:16am
  • VeeX6661

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    I would have windmill kicked his dad in his damn throat! Ugh, he makes me angry! Anyways, amazing job as always!<3
    June 26th, 2012 at 05:17am
  • gothique4

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    oh my god his father is a total asshat :-(

    I'm glad that Bri stood up to him though I would have been tempted to smack him into next week
    June 26th, 2012 at 04:46am
  • VeeX6661

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    This was such an amazing chapter. it's so cute to hear how she's still in love her. I love how you clarified without making it the same ole' story that was told before. And I just now made the connection that me and Sam have the same name (: I would die to have an immortal child with Brian!(: Good job! update soon.
    June 23rd, 2012 at 09:25pm
  • MoMo_92

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    This story is so passionate becuz they still love each other even tho Brian left four years ago and he still is committed to Sam I just love it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    June 23rd, 2012 at 09:02am
  • VeeX6661

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    Surprisingly, I love this story. I usually don't go for the whole fictional powers, and mythical creatures stuff, but the way you are writing this, it is coming off more as a movie than anything. It's really dragging me in! It's absolutely fantastic. You're doing a great job. & for some reason, I really want them to have a son, I think that will make the perfect family if everything works out! <3
    June 22nd, 2012 at 05:33am
  • MoMo_92

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    Brian is so passionate and just loving, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    June 21st, 2012 at 08:09am
  • andrea weekes

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    this chapter is definitely my favourite! brian was doing the right thing to take his lover and daughter to be with him. and hopefully they stay together forever. who cares human or god as long as they love each other. update soon!!
    June 21st, 2012 at 06:08am
  • gothique4

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    I just love this update and wow she got to meet James Hetfield and he's helped her to see how much Brian loves her :-)

    Can't wait to read more
    June 19th, 2012 at 12:07pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    June 19th, 2012 at 10:38am
  • powerofkisses

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    DON'T STOP! :) Awesome story so far.
    June 17th, 2012 at 10:48am