December 9th, 2012 at 10:51am
@ MistressOfInsanity
Well gosh thank you so much for all the feedback. I needed that. I don't really have people to edit my story so sometimes I have a lot of mistakes because I miss them myself (you would be surprised how much I do that). I don't quite know how to make a custom layout or else I would have done it already lol but I will work on it. And the italics was what I forgot how to do so thanks for reminding me. Oh and I love the "I only had enough money to buy paint for you." line too! I really surprise myself sometimes. It is moments like these that I say the character speaks for themselves lol. Overall, I am just genuinely happy you responded so well. I will fix some things and remember to keep a thesaurus around lol1 Thanks again! It is much appreciated! :)
Yeah, editing is something that you have to train yourself to do. You have to practice it. When I was learning how to proofread properly it helped if I hand-wrote the chapters first, then word processed them (basically it gives you a first edit), then I'd proofread again. Then I leave it for a day, sleep on it, or give it a few hours, depending on what time I finish it. Then I proofread/edit again, then finally post. And of course you'll want to check it once you've actually posted it. It seems like a fair amount of work but it gets easier and faster the longer you work at it.
Custom layouts are tricky, but there are tons of pre-made ones which are really easy to use. Just go to this page and have a look. Personally I like to make them myself. I'm not the most computer savvy person, but for me layouts are an important part of writing on the internet so I want them to be personal. Even if it means hours of frustration. So if you're interested, this is a great tutorial on the layout maker. Have a play around!
I love moments like that, where the characters sort of possess you. It's usually when you get some of your best writing.
It's nice to see that you appreciate the comment. Some people get either super defensive or just ignore you and it's like "I wasn't trying to be mean! I was trying to help!" But yeah, just take your time and don't be scared to research things. I google all the time for stories, and Mibba's Knowledge Base is pretty helpful too