Wake Me Up - Comments

Oh my god, this is beautiful. I honestly felt that it was you talking and quoting, like the beginning scene to a movie with narration. You convey the emotion so perfectly. This is so fantastic and lovely. I love it.

I love this. :] Relevaaaaaant.

this is amazing! i love the way you use the quotes to sort of start off or back your train of thought. it feels like you're really talking. your voice and opinion and character comes across so well and so does the emotion you're trying to convey. i totally agree and can sort of relate. i hope you keep writing because i really did enjoy this and was actually kind of sad there wasn't anymore to read!