Personally, the story is hard to read. The background, the font color, and everything else made it difficult to read. I do like the story though. and it seems like there are a lot of commas in the story, which is fairly distracting for a reader. It's pretty good! Are you gonna be continuing it, at all? because if you are, I'd love to read the rest of it!
December 15th, 2013 at 03:31am